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Will it LAST

Beautiful, 
beautiful, 
and beautiful
is she.                       
Skin so soft
and smooth 
that
her lips
are perfect
for me.
Love 
when
she places 
her head
on my chest.
My chin
caressing 
her
forehead 
as she lays
to rest.
Awaking 
and staring 
deeply
into ones eye.
Departing
falls to tears
and kissing 
as she 
waves goodbye.
Alone 
reminiscing 
to the moments
that just past;
Praying
that she's
the one for me
But, will it last?!


Pace, G
"An old piece"

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  1. Date: 7/1/2012 2:23:00 PM

    That is the million dollar question!! Most of us are not millionaires lol but a few are blessed enough to be! Beautiful poem!! Really is...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 7/6/2012 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly sweetheart!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:11:00 AM

    Loved it any way!Carma"

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, simply an old piece!!
  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:09:00 AM

    you know that is the issue with every relationship.there is always a maybe oh perhaps and kinder.eish

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 9:50:00 PM

    Excellent work, yet again. You created the moment - I could see and feel it all.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/4/2012 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you beautiful!!!
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Good imagery, "chin caressing hee forehead". Good piece, fam.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/21/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Marlon!! Always.