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Hold Tight

Hold tight these lips of mine 
Keep still the secrets inside 
  How would I explain   " If "
Ever my secret  revealed 

But then why shouldn't  I 
Why not shout it to the sun 
   Whisper it to the stars 

A secret it would be no more 
I tremble with the anticipation
Of holding you within these arms
Of sharing the quite times  together
Of tasting and savoring all of you 


These eyes know well the pleasures
 of your face 
The mind wonders of what the eye 
can not see  
As you pass, my sense's  fill  with 
the scent of your cologne 
 
I ache to know your musk  of
heated passions 
To feel the warmth inside you
To touch your very soul

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  1. Date: 9/15/2012 6:18:00 AM

    "GULP!" Gosh, Debbie...you should have pinned a warning sign to this one; and old bard's heart can only take so much you know...wink* Beautifully rendered with stunning imagery to steal the senses of any red-blooded boy...you've taken your skills and gentle, romantic soul and composed the virtual sensually passionate and alluring masterpiece. Whew! My mouse's tail is on fire...LOL! Splendid work, M'Lady...absolutely! You sure do know about love and affection...MMmmm! Thank you, Debbie ~ Rascal

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 9/15/2012 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your sweet words ;}
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Ohhh Lala..nice one..erotic and well done..tastefully done ;) You go gal! Light & Love

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 9/6/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie ;} I wrote this back in 1992 -93
  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:41:00 AM

    Nice.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 7/12/2012 3:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Edison ;}
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Wheew this is a hottie alright Debbie, i must thank you for your great comment on the write of mine.

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:16:00 AM

    Feel the passion in this write, another excellent write.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 5/2/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anthony,, I wrote it 1992,, have a great day ;}
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:52:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Very passionate work..Glad that I stopped by.I don't know about that musk scent though.Sara

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 1:49:00 PM

    ...I can feel your beauty inside of me baby * You feel sooo beautiful ~ My love, John!:) ~

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 3:39:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Ow Sweet Debbie, how fortunate to be loved by such lovely beauty ˜ Deep my beautiful lady ˜ Forever & for always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Sweet and romantic love poem Debbie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 4/21/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Annie ;} have a great day !
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 5:08:00 AM

    Nice love poem, you describe the desire so well.