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My Precious Roxanne

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My Precious Roxanne

Teardrops falling like a waterfall
Down the river they go 
Flowing rapidly creating a rough ride
As sadness rushes to my mind
All I could think of is all the good times we had
Running in our backyard,
Riding the waves of the beach
Oh what will I do just to smile with you
Now that you are gone 
The memories will be like knives 
Stabbing into my skin
You are such nice person to be around
Probably the greatest in the world
I,m so sorry you must go
Can't help but blame myself
But I know you rather have me happy
As my last teardrop falls
I will forget you my precious Roxanne
 


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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 5:51:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Don't forget baby * My sweeet beautiful love ˜ Hahaha, I love the love I find inside Your beautiful words ˜ Don't let go of your baby ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 7:35:00 PM
    A sentimental write Jonathan, enjoyed reading your poem tonight, hugs vie

    mohammed Avatar jonathan mohammed
    Date: 4/21/2012 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks vie i,m glad you enjoyed it .... much love Jonathan
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 4:57:00 PM
    Emotive and expressive work..May your gift grow in the years to come..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

    mohammed Avatar jonathan mohammed
    Date: 4/20/2012 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are welcome... much love Jonathan
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Touching poem, but very well written. - Have a lovely weekend Jonathan. - oxox Anne-Lise

    mohammed Avatar jonathan mohammed
    Date: 4/20/2012 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks you very much .... much love Jonathan
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:41:00 PM
    I see a lovely tribute to love, yet sad and haunting.

    mohammed Avatar jonathan mohammed
    Date: 4/20/2012 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Very painfull write here Jonathan..Jeepers!

    mohammed Avatar jonathan mohammed
    Date: 4/20/2012 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Dan I really continue to like your piece 'Did I get Ya " it is one of my favorites now... much love Jonathan