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My Very FIRST TIME

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My Very FIRST TIME

                                        I 
                                        jerked it
                                        out to place
                                        it back in and
                                        it seems as though I can't get any out.

                                        I
                                      jerked it
                                     out again
                                  to place it back
                       in, yet, no luck in getting any out.

                                        So,
                                      I tried
                                    ANOTHER
                               form of Pleasure,
                      taking off the lid and using plastic.

                                        I 
                                        simply
                                        just wanted
                                        to drink my milk-
                                        shake using a straw but a spoon will do.



Pace, G
04-20-2012


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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 8:58:00 AM
    Pace This was a fun and humorous write. You really "punked" the reader. LOL You should read my My Poem Of Trickery And Fun. Thanks for the sweet comment on my Angels poem.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 10:57:00 AM
    LOL! I loved this! Kept me entertained of what you were going to do about it till the end. ;)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Loooooove this! Lol

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:49:00 PM
    great write PG Ink,shake it lol

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 10:01:00 PM
    Taking off the lid and using plastic? Hmmmmmm...interesting! I like this and that lol!!

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 9:54:00 AM
    lol... for a minute....... I was thinking you were trying to squeeze money out of your very first piggy bank...lol... i remember the first time i jerked my piggy bank around and could not get them pennies out...lol..i put it back,, than i decided to give it a second chance. LOL~ Than i settled for the second option. I dropped it on the floor and Oops!!! IT BROKE! I'm very glad you found out that spoons WILL DO"... hope you tossed that plastic in the recycling bin... I'm being silly in my comment. The whole time I knew what you were doing.. LMFAO...PD

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Cute....Love the way you draw me in, playing with my mind.

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:18:00 AM
    "I'll take one cup, or two, or three, Please... heeheeeee...

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 6/2/2012 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know,but you love it you can't deniy me! Lol... told you i was bad...
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 6/2/2012 12:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..wow!! You are too much!!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 6/2/2012 12:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lmao
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:34:00 PM
    Yea this was AWESOME!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 6/1/2012 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..Thank you!! Love your work dearly!!
  1. Date: 5/26/2012 1:59:00 AM
    Oh Very clever !!!! LOL - loved it.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 5/28/2012 5:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:53:00 PM
    hahahaha. LOVE It.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 5/12/2012 2:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..Thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:10:00 AM
    So glad you explained it all in the last 2 lines. It's great getting my day started with a laugh !

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/30/2012 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by!! A pleasure!!
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:56:00 PM
    Lol...thanks..hugs

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:16:00 PM
    A little misdirection never hurt anyone cute. Here's a Hugg for the fun TLee

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/30/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol!!! Thanks for sharing your comments.. hugs
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 9:23:00 AM
    nice one G...regards...Joseph

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/30/2012 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by!!
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 9:17:00 PM
    lol... i luv it... good one G Pace... smiles... chiquita

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/30/2012 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for sharing with me!!
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:06:00 PM
    LOL...that was a good one :) Only you!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/20/2012 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for sharing!!! Hugs and kisses
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Good one G. - one cup milk every day is good for you. :) - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/20/2012 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much!!
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Lmao you got ed'body good with this....hilarious by all means

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/20/2012 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lmao!!! thanks
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    Date: 4/20/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Er'body typo
  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:26:00 AM
    LOL I love this...it is so unique!! Marty

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/20/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sooo much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! hugs