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You're Turning Into Luke

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You're Turning Into Luke

And so there it is. The truth. What was once a far off glimmer is now glaring. In my face. Interogating.
How can you not see the hope you gave. The hand you held out and snatched away as I jumped. And you watched me fall alone.
How do I get it so wrong? I swore I wouldn't play this game again. No matter how many times I roll the die it always lands on ONE.
Or was it imagination all along?
I can't do this again. I think this time it may just kill me. And I may just let it. Let it wash over me. A sea of 'I wanted'. I'll drown in this hopelessness.
Silly of me for thinking that this was my precious, second chance at tasting bliss. I have to realise and accept the truth.
That you don't love me too.

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  1. Date: 4/21/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Wish you all the best Jodie, take care of yourself. Well written. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 9:54:00 AM
    it is hard to be patient, yet the truth is, when a man is interested in a lady, he follows her. not the other way around. dont fall until the right one comes along. fill your days with happy things, things that make you happy. hugs, Catie :)