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Perfect Love

Perfect Love

Perfect love carries an impersonal touch,
like silent buddahs on lotus blossoms,
waiting for suffering to breathe a final, quiet sigh.
Like ice on distant mountains,
waiting to nourish the world below.
Like a Mother hawk, hunting high,
in a cloudless sky.
A love so unearthly blind and beautiful,
That it makes no distinction between caressing mother and child,
or a perfect stranger.
 

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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 11:25:00 PM

    STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 2:41:00 PM

    Many good lines, especially the last two. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:15:00 AM

    A splendid piece, with emotive language and rich imagery. Well done, Mark... and welcome to the Soup!

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 7:43:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mark. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol