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Finally Found My PIE

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Finally Found My PIE

                                                        Birth
                                                   To Puberty;
                                           A sudden crave for Pie
                                      Couldn't tell you what kind of Pie
                            My conscious only told me to search for this Pie
                        From young adult to adult, yet, I haven't found this Pie
             I've traveled the distance going to several restaurants, and yet, no Pie
         I stumbled across a stranger, and somehow we started talking about this Pie
        He stated, "whatever your needs, wants, or desires, just pray, even if its Pie
             Shaking my head in disbelief, I walked away, still thinking about this Pie
               Starving; at home willing to do something different about this Pie
                 I kneeled down beside my bed; my eyes were closed to this Pie
                   Thinking back to the conversation I had in regards to this Pie
                    Finally mustering up words, I prayed and asked for this Pie
                      I received a voice saying, " You have now found the PIE,

                               

                                             Now, my son, eat of this Pie
                                                          For I'AM
                                                        YOUR ONLY
                                                             PIE."
         
 Pace, G
04-19-2012                                         

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  1. Date: 6/5/2014 10:59:00 PM
    Pace This is so inspiring and uniquely written. A very powerful and deep message for the reader to feel. Thank you for the nice comment on my 100th poem write.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 8:31:00 PM
    thank you for the comment on my blog... means much... xox~pd

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    Date: 8/19/2012 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No thank you PD!!
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 2:29:00 PM
    DEEP and POWERFUL! No need to look, He is always there!! I enjoyed this surprise ending and agree...

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    Date: 8/19/2012 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Doreen!!! Hugs!!!
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:27:00 AM
    This poem is awesome.... God, forever is my grace... luv~PD

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    Date: 8/19/2012 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes indeed maam!!! Thanks PD
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 3:43:00 PM
    Ah yes, the Pie poem, the first poem of yours that I read. I remember making a fool of myself, because I was initially expecting the pie to be shaped a bit differently after seeing the title. But your poem is a much more soulful message. I replied to soupmail.

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    Date: 8/19/2012 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...where are you Chris!!?
  1. Date: 6/17/2012 11:01:00 AM
    I love your originality here. I totally love it when poets find a different way to say and present things to their readers as it takes away the repetition. One fact said one way reaches few. The same fact said different ways reaches many in different ways and may even find a way to reach you. Huggs TLee

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    Date: 6/17/2012 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I totally agree..and i love your comment..thank you for sharing with me..always!!
  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Wow!!!!I am loving your analogy in this piece. Thought provoking and inspirational. Love the depth

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    Date: 6/7/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you beautiful!!! Muah..hugs
  1. Date: 5/31/2012 3:35:00 AM
    "loving you more n' more, can't get enough of your caragious soul... This is astounding. work Carma' I tried doing a shape but don't think i did it right....

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    Date: 5/31/2012 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dearly Carma..soo beautiful!!
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 5:23:00 PM
    I really like the picture of the pie and the True Pie is the only pie. keep thriving on this Pie and you will never need another pie. Thanks also for your endearing comments on my Spiritual Thought poem. - Peggy

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    Date: 5/2/2012 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...thank you so much for the motivation.
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:50:00 PM
    Enjoyed this evangelical work ..Good job..Looks like a great merginue light and fluffy..Sara

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    Date: 4/30/2012 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you maam for stopping by and sharing with me...hugs
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:45:00 PM
    Nice write!

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    Date: 4/26/2012 2:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir!
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:23:00 AM
    good analogy :)

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    Date: 4/26/2012 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you maam!!
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 11:54:00 PM
    lol... Nice one G Pace...smiles... chiquita

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    Date: 4/20/2012 2:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sweetheart!!! Smiles
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 11:05:00 PM
    G.....you n Chris got me laughing, I wanna slice my brother's! Lol good work!

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    Date: 4/20/2012 2:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...Thank you..I couldn't stop laughing.
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 10:48:00 PM
    I meant no disrespect in my prior comment. I guess that I am an eternal horny man. I meant wot I said before - this is a very quirky, entertaining poem. Original feel to it. Unique. I enjoy it when poems are unique like this one. Hold up, I am going to check out some more of your work. And a belated welcome to PoetrySoup! Better late than never. I didn't recognize your name.

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    Date: 4/20/2012 2:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh no you're fine!!! I really enjoyed your humor.. Thanks a lot!!!
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 6:44:00 PM
    I found this poem to be quite quirky and entertaining. I'll be honest, I was thinking 'bout some other type of pie....more along the lines of a woman's sweet honey pie. Maybe God isn't feeling me right at the moment, cuz I am still going after some o' that sweet, honey pie :D

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    Date: 4/19/2012 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Falling on the floor laughing!!! Wow...thank-you for sharing.
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 1:37:00 PM
    The sun is shining bright here this afternoon in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and outstanding writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us G. Love, Carol

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    Date: 4/19/2012 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    All smiles!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts Carol...always and always a pleasure!!!