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Men

  He's saying that he loves me,
That there's no one else above me.
Yet I'm sitting here in pain again.
 ..Men...

  He has my heart,
He has my world.
  He has me with one single word.
Yet I'm sitting here in pain again..
..Men...

  When he knows all the right words to say,
When we actually have a sunny day.
  It's not long before it to rains again.
..Men...

  When your heart can't take much more,
But you push yourself every time.
  When your too in love to let him go,
You just can't break the heavy chains.
  I'm on my knees to pray again
..Men...

  When you have a man who wants to show,
That he loves you but your minds too scared to let the past go.
  Then you find that he is married and has 3 kids,
And you realize that they're all the same.
  I'm sitting here in the rain again.
..Men...

  When your six years old,
And unwillingly have your innocence taken away.
  When you realize that you had no choice,
Throughout your life in your heart it will stay.
  I'm sitting here restrained again
..Men...

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Hi Hannah, i feel your pain, its not just women who get abused, like Marlon says, we are not all bad. Loved your verse, blessings, Carl

    Croy Avatar Hannah Croy Date: 2/4/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carl. :), I appreciate the support. I know your not all the same I just recently found that out. Its just how I used to look at men.
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 9:48:00 AM

    The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Hannah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 6:56:00 AM

    The last verse makes it an truly intense work..keep your head up. We're not all bad. Strong write!

    Croy Avatar Hannah Croy Date: 8/14/2013 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 6:45:00 AM

    Yes....Men... Like your poem! - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Croy Avatar Hannah Croy Date: 8/14/2013 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Thank you for your poetry and sharing Hannah, I enjoyed stopping by your poetry nice to have you on site, hugs vie