a ku ku krazy day by Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

a ku ku krazy day

a very loud noise started ringing from my clock— I fell out of bed a bumped water glass rolling across the hard floor— I slipped on my head a loud screaming sound resonated through the house— my face turned bright red my husband woke up hysterically laughing— I was on the floor I could not get up without someone assisting— ku ku krazy day I went back to bed wondering what day it was— perhaps, tomorrow Ó April 18, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: ????.....!!!!!.....Ku Ku Crazy......!!!!!.....???? Sponsor Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver


Laura Breidenthal Date: 5/23/2012 4:35:00 PM Interesting piece! I enjoyed this very much! Always, Laura
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/4/2012 5:32:00 AM A belated congratulations on your win in the "Ku Ku Crazy" Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2012 6:02:00 AM Congrats on your win poem!!! - Have a lovely new week to you. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
nette onclaud Date: 4/30/2012 3:06:00 AM edgy piece that deserves a top spot.. congrats, dane-ann!..:) huggs
David Williams Date: 4/29/2012 1:23:00 AM Dane Ann big congrats on your win, hope my day doesn't start like this...David
Deborah Burch Date: 4/28/2012 9:57:00 PM Congratulations Dane Ann...lol This is so funny I am still laughing and can barely type...lol Well Done my friend on your well deserved 1st place win!!! big hugs,love deb LOL :D
Gwendolen R. Date: 4/28/2012 9:29:00 PM Dane Ann....where in the world are your glasses young lady?...I am having fun reading this one...I am fav'n it immediately! You should'a whacked that hubby in the head...u could'a been injured! hahaha. A most awesome write.. so enjoy your ten foot high imaginary trophy...Awesome. Love, Gwendolen
Ruben O. Date: 4/28/2012 9:10:00 PM "I went back to bed/wondering what day it was—/perhaps, tomorrow" !! Waaaaaa Hahahhahhahhahahha!! Im LMAO!!! Hilarious! : ) This ending KU-KU is terrific! Congratulations Dane Ann! Thank for the laugh!
Tracie- Indigo Dreamweaver Date: 4/28/2012 9:06:00 PM Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest Dane luv...well done xxx
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/28/2012 3:21:00 PM This is funny, Dane Ann. I think Tracie will really enjoy it. Wishing you success in her contest. Love, carolyn
James Peranteau Date: 4/25/2012 1:16:00 PM smiles Hello my dear poet ! I have just recently recovered from much perspiration; and I am back like the tic toc of the clock; I hope, I do...and what a fine surprise to see your name amongst my poetic friends to visit! This was a treat...for the smile was much needed love ! Thanx for the witty write Dane Ann; and I pray you've missed me not.....so much ! Have a wonderful week dear poet ! Much love, james
Sara Kendrick Date: 4/18/2012 4:17:00 PM Reads like a winner..How creative and clever of you..Good luck in the contest..Sara

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