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a ku ku krazy day

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a ku ku krazy day

a very loud noise
started ringing from my clock—
I fell out of bed

a bumped water glass
rolling across the hard floor—
I slipped on my head

a loud screaming sound
resonated through the house—
my face turned bright red

my husband woke up
hysterically laughing—
I was on the floor

I could not get up
without someone assisting—
ku ku krazy day

I went back to bed
wondering what day it was—
perhaps, tomorrow

Ó April 18, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  ????.....!!!!!.....Ku Ku Crazy......!!!!!.....???? 
Sponsor	Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver



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  1. Date: 5/23/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Interesting piece! I enjoyed this very much! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 5:32:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in the "Ku Ku Crazy" Dane Ann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 6:02:00 AM
    Congrats on your win poem!!! - Have a lovely new week to you. - oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 3:06:00 AM
    edgy piece that deserves a top spot.. congrats, dane-ann!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:23:00 AM
    Dane Ann big congrats on your win, hope my day doesn't start like this...David

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:57:00 PM
    Congratulations Dane Ann...lol This is so funny I am still laughing and can barely type...lol Well Done my friend on your well deserved 1st place win!!! big hugs,love deb LOL :D

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:29:00 PM
    Dane Ann....where in the world are your glasses young lady?...I am having fun reading this one...I am fav'n it immediately! You should'a whacked that hubby in the head...u could'a been injured! hahaha. A most awesome write.. so enjoy your ten foot high imaginary trophy...Awesome. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:10:00 PM
    "I went back to bed/wondering what day it was—/perhaps, tomorrow" !! Waaaaaa Hahahhahhahhahahha!! Im LMAO!!! Hilarious! : ) This ending KU-KU is terrific! Congratulations Dane Ann! Thank for the laugh!

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest Dane luv...well done xxx

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:21:00 PM
    This is funny, Dane Ann. I think Tracie will really enjoy it. Wishing you success in her contest. Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 1:16:00 PM
    *smiles* Hello my dear poet ! I have just recently recovered from much perspiration; and I am back like the tic toc of the clock; I hope, I do...and what a fine surprise to see your name amongst my poetic friends to visit! This was a treat...for the smile was much needed love ! Thanx for the witty write Dane Ann; and I pray you've missed me not.....so much ! Have a wonderful week dear poet ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 4:17:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..How creative and clever of you..Good luck in the contest..Sara