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Wallpaper Vapors

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Wallpaper Vapors

Wallpaper Vapors? 

I wanted to repaper my room
But mom and dad said it’s too soon
You just did it yesterday, you crazy kook
But THAT paper had kayaks and today I want nuns
My parents just looked at me, clearly stunned
Had I gone religious all of a sudden?
Ignoring them I tore down the paper with glee
It wasn’t level, anyone could see
And put up my nuns in revelry
But the nuns didn’t pop
So I decided to stop
And hang up my posters of musician Kidd Rock
But that looked too teenish to me
So I threw them away and grabbed a painting
Van Gogh’s “Starry night” looked like a dream
The perfect wall covering, at least while I sleep...

Palindromes used: repaper, mom, dad, kook, level
4/17/12
Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 7:03:00 AM
    I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 8:53:00 AM
    ABSOLUTELY Spectacular!!! YOU HAVE REAL TALENT.

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 8:52:00 AM
    ABSOLUTELY Spectacular!!! YOU HAVE REAL TALENT.

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 5:27:00 AM
    A BEAUTIFUL BREATH OF FRESH AIR!! Playfully Inventive and loaded with Fun.

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:00:00 PM
    A work of art with a work of art in it! I like! :o)

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Great work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 6:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 6:30:00 PM
    Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:17:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Sue. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Got a chuckle. Kudos. hugs, Ralph.

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Well done Susan, Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 5:11:00 AM
    Well it's a fact that it is a woman's privilege to change her mind! Sounds like a room to keep one awake! Nightmares anyone? :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 12:10:00 AM
    maybe you should try paint just kidding thank you for your comment tina:)

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 8:06:00 PM
    hey, susan, just stopping by!!! how are ya?

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Excellent one! :D So entertaining and fun! ~I agree with the comments below as well. Keep up the excellent work - you have a way with words. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 2:43:00 PM
    susan, thanks again for the big win in your contest. I had no idea how well you would like it, so I am really happy that you liked it so much!!

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 1:46:00 PM
    a lively, upbeat piece, susan... enjoyed the wishy-washy feel... i'll take kidd anytime.. grrreat job!....winning wishs and thanks for enjoying my blame piece for you.... thanks lots and super hugggs! :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Susan, ooo I love KidD Rock.. this was a very fun poem... enjoy your sleep... always..pd

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 8:14:00 PM
    Ha,ha...Nice write! :o)

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 6:17:00 PM
    wow, I LOVE your palindrome. It is so much more coherent than mine turned out to be!! Way to do the contest. This is one of the best.

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 11:06:00 AM
    hahaha,fun and witty write Susan:) Great rhyme,I especially liked the ending of it.Hope "starry night" will give you your best sleep! Hugs,Arild