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Final Good-bye

Small and silver feel the bite,
on this stark cold dreary night.
Run a line across my arm; 
watch the razor work its charm.

A river of red courses to the floor,
As I shiver more and more.
A stream of tears flow from my eyes,
not from grief, but last good-byes.

It’s not your fault, don’t blame yourself.
I’m the one who’s in this mess.
I tried so hard to just be me.
But in the end, I was never free.

Life is hard, the pain was short.
I just wanted to take the easy way out.
Now my mind it starts to fade,
And I know that it’s my last day.

As I close my eyes, this one last time,
I say my final, last good-bye.

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Yes, life can bee hard sometime Ryan, well written poem. - Welcome !!! - oxox Anne-Lise

    Hebets Avatar Ryan Hebets
    Date: 4/19/2012 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. This was my suicide note when I was fourteen. I never did it, but This was how I pictured it being.
  1. Date: 4/18/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Hi Ryan welcome to the soup i often think it is not an easy way out but a very brave one will be back to read more

    Hebets Avatar Ryan Hebets
    Date: 4/18/2012 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This poem has very special meaning to me, because this was my suicide note when I was fourteen. And thank you.