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Haiku 06

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Haiku 06

wedding cake
filled with fruits and nuts
welcome  family

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  1. Date: 4/22/2012 5:53:00 AM
    The first thing I got was the family were part of the fruit and nuts! What a laugh today Phil, I think you probably infer that too! :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 5:59:00 PM
    ha ha....I just bought 2 birthday cakes yesterday... and one was fruity... love your haiku... it has an mmmmmmimage...pd

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:37:00 PM
    SO Sweet, Phyllis. Were you also making a joke about crazy families? We have an expression here about California being the land of "fruits and nuts" and I am curious if that expression is what you meant here in this haiku. Well, in any event, it's a GREAT haiku. Luv, Andrea

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    Date: 4/18/2012 11:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I meant that some are sweet like fruit but some are crazy kinda nutty. All in all a good bunch. back in Saskatoon and hit freezing rain part of the way and is supposed to snow on thur when i head homne
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:55:00 PM
    Hehe! If I do replace cake with 'party', then this is even funnier to me....and a minor representation of my extended family :D~Thanks for the chuckle, Phyllis.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:57:00 PM
    I'm glad you said the cake and not the "party".

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 6:20:00 PM
    Well written ..