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Twilight her Name


A soft whisper from the far sky like her love talk. I turn my head crimson red sky now spreads its wings. Twilight her name a sweet dame's call don't blame me...bye. =============000============

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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 4:22:00 PM

    wow! Beautiful poem!i especially loved stanza 2!a really beautiful picture!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Today you are my muse and with this poem you have made one come from me. I will post it in a little bit. I love the picture that this gave to me. May the beauty of many a sunset be yours. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:34:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 3:57:00 PM

    A coy ending ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 1:54:00 PM

    yeyy, congrats on your win in my contest, kashi... something went wrong with the TPS settings; good thing it was repaired!!.. awwright!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 6:08:00 PM

    aha, GOOD, Kash, you put a better rhyming word in the middle one's last line. Me likes!!

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 2:22:00 PM

    yayyyy!.... thanks for entering, kashi buddy!!.. come over!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 8:02:00 AM

    I can feel her, teasing.. a great sweet writing, Kash. Re my 'I wouldn't say that' yes, I was angry when I wrote it! Good guess :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 12:54:00 AM

    Great dear poet. Really nice.

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 12:09:00 AM

    Great entry for the contest. Good luck and thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:56:00 PM

    Lovely and soft words in this poem kash,wish you all the best in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:48:00 PM

    that bird is not a her, it's a him, a kisser of flowers, remember? heehee. Well, Kash, I am outta here!!!

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:03:00 PM

    yours is really nice, Kash.very romantic. soupmail.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 5:11:00 PM

    lol... nice one!

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 4:11:00 PM

    Such a beautiful whisper of love, Kash! Terrific! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:11:00 PM

    This is beautiful Kash. Best wishes for you in Nette's contest. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Soft and sweet Kashi, twilight perfectly portrayed here!

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:25:00 AM

    you paint a beautiful image Kash - enjoyed this write.