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loneliness

Lost in the cold solace of truth
i regrettfully long for the innocence of youth
but shaped are the steps i have left on this earth
i am left to question my reason and worth
a deep saddness longs for things i will never own
loneliness and bitterness, these are the only friends i have known
when did my heart wither and hide 
when did all hope of love die?  

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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:57:00 AM

    Bulls eye! A tough subject... but very nicely treated... Terry

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 12:58:00 AM

    Well written Tina.You expressed this topic well.

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 9:29:00 AM

    i liked the way you addressed the subject.

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Tina. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Sad words, good writing. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Tina congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your #8 win in my contest!

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:24:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup Tina! Hope you will read, comments and write alot of poem here - You write well. - Have a lovely day, love from Norway and Anne-Lise