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Hickery Dickery

                                                  

                                                      a clock is ticking
                                            as a mouse climbs up the chain
                                                 at one the mouse falls

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  1. Date: 4/26/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Very clever!!! lol :) Well Done Terry!! I love it!!love,deb

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:41:00 PM

    A haiku that captures the essence of the nursery rhyme...good work.

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/15/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was having fun with this one. Thought it might catch a few off guard with an almost forgotten nursery rhyme. Hope you found it a bit of fun. Thanks for your kind review.
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:38:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Like Lightning, Falling From Heaven ˜ Love Always, John!:) *

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/15/2012 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    To me this was my little joke and a bit of fun. In the true sense of Haiku this is not a proper Haiku but like a bad child I couldn't resist. With many it will be like a light going on either at the end of reading this or a bit after.Thanks for the kind review.