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The Hunt

                                                            


                                                        a morsel of food
                                                 a mammal scurries to hide
                                                    as hawks soar on high

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  1. Date: 5/12/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Very nice haiku here.So what do you think am I a male or a female?

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 5/13/2012 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your picture looked male at least the one I saw but your sensativity is more akin to a female so either you are a ladies female butch or a ladies man with a beautiful soul. I must confess that I couldn't swear which but to me that doesn't matter. If you are my friend that is all that matters. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/29/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Nice image... I would also like to try Haiku... but it seems a bit beyond me... mabe later (with a bit of inspiration from yours...) Terry

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/29/2012 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Terry we have several people on the Soup that are next to experts at it. I have been taking lessons from one named Charlie Henderson. They also have classes on Facebook. I warn you once you get started and understand them they are addicting. TLee Thanks for the review.
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 3:55:00 PM

    Well done Terry, like this one ! - oxox Anne-Lise

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/15/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just trying to spread my wings with different styles of poetry. This next Haiku that I did Hickery Dickery I did for fun. Thanks for your kind review Anne-lise. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Smile ˜ So Let It Be As It Must Be For Now ˜ I Just Rejoice In The Beauty Which In Unsearchable Wisdom Has Fashioned It All * 'O, Sooo Much Beauty ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen Date: 4/15/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm not sure I understand your review except maybe in the grand scheme of things but thank you for your kindness to review. I am just learning about Haiku and am trying to perfect my use of this form with the help of another member.