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Temptation

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Temptation

***Acrostic***


Treacherous, scandalous jezebel trying to cast her spell, an 
Egregious rascal trying to sink her teeth into my skin 
Mischievous, I can smell her fragrance, sweet  
Pheromones, her sexual desires like poetry  
Tempting my 
Animal urges to do something irredeemable, disagreeable. 
Temptress of forbidden temptations, I am already given the
Invitation, testing me, I will dispel this jezebel but I am 
Overcome, intrigued in mysterious rapture, I
Need to recapture my senses.

Jared Pickett
Asavvy1
4/15/2012

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  1. Date: 2/7/2014 2:51:00 PM
    YOUR THOUGHTS ON WOMEN...ARE INTRIQUING!!! AS ARE YOU SIR...YOU TRULY HAVE A GIFT...I TRULY LOVE YOUR WORK!!!

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 7:01:00 AM
    :) Ow this jezebel..little devil .. is causing you trouble :) Gave me a smile! We all have temptations in life cos we are human,and human attracts human.. but with each temptation won.. the love for those we call our own grows stronger.So lovely to read your poetry again Jared :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 6:15:00 PM
    Great acrostic. I think for an acrostic , it's better not to center them. Then we can clearly see the word spelled downward. Keep your poems coming, Jared!!

    Pickett Avatar Jared Pickett
    Date: 4/18/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree!! Thank you!!:JP]
  1. Date: 4/17/2012 6:10:00 PM
    Ahhh yes do enjoy but not surcome and then you will have won! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Cute one..Enjoyed reading this Acrostic this one this afternoon..Don't let the Jezebel get the best of you..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 10:13:00 AM
    Greetings to you, Jared. Temptation must be controlled, but it's as inevitable as escaping the voluptuousness of a beautiful woman. Yes, we are tested by these urges that may somehow lead to regret...if not felt for the right one. I have loved reading your poem...full of fear and irrepressible desire for this temptress. You end your Acrostic with an amazing line, " I need to recapture my senses. " I have appreciated r your kind comments on my poetry. You are always welcome to drop me a line. I wish you success, love and hapiness. Your friend in poetry, Andrew.

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Whew! Sounds like you need help from the other side Jared! Hot write with lots of descript. Gotta go get some ice.! Good to see you, Jared. We both haven't been on too much I guess. Take good care my friend. Haven't talked with Taz in forever. Bob

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 7:41:00 AM
    Very well written Jared.....like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 12:51:00 AM
    very nice write

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 12:32:00 AM
    wow,well done my friend..