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goodbye, sweet day

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goodbye, sweet day

Magenta sky
     shines at twilight
as I ponder
how the sun glows
      though night flows in!

Dusk grows colder. . . 

A lone gull’s cry
has me sighing
       goodbye, sweet day.

Written 4/13/12
by Andrea Dietrich

Inspired by nette onclaud's
** THAN-BAUK A TWILIGHT

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:27:00 AM

    Beautiful, Andrea. I've been wanting to write one of these. Yours is lovely. And KOs...3 that I can remember. Funny though, I've not broken many major bones...only 3 fingers, one toe, and a fractured ankle...all in high school sports.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:01:00 PM

    So give me another phrase.................:...

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:36:00 AM

    It is like a song Andrea, so beautiful and so full of colors. Just a few words here and there and it could be a great song. Congrats on your grand win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Andrea D

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:36:00 AM

    It is like a song Andrea, so beautiful and so full of colors. Just a few words here and there and it could be a great song. Congrats on your grand win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Andrea D

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Hi sweetie-- shucks, just dropping in to say that I owe you a ton of mail! My connection is doing that weird thing again?! Being so slow that I can't load my email But I can load Soup pages (even so slow)_-- I don't think I would even be able to comment on everybody in the winners' lists right now-- thanks so much for what you said about my shower poem :) hehe cute rhyming in there-- I will have to catch up on your new poems too! Sorry! Hugs to you sweetie, I better sleep!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 9:00:00 PM

    No cat no dog.......

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:50:00 AM

    One of the forms I have not tried and looks great to me. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:00:00 AM

    Wonderful poem, of good bye of a sweet day, lovely worded, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Very creative and descriptive winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 3:58:00 PM

    Very original play! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 3:30:00 PM

    lovely andie.. congrats on your win in my contest... magenta sky--what an opening!..:) huggs.. still reeling from events in my life; take care and huggs!

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:27:00 AM

    Great job. I forgot the form and was just reading a bit of poetry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Creative! But then, thats no surprise...lol. Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win Andy xx

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 2:06:00 PM

    You wrote a silhouette of Nette's picture. A great TB, Andrea! Alas, good bye sweet day...A crispy ring to it and I know she will really like your format..I yahoo'd u back regarding the S P site...Hugs, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 3:47:00 PM

    With the morning we see the light. As our hearts are reborn with delight. Through out the day we go our way. To find the night lives in disamay.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 2:51:00 PM

    This is a beauty, andrea! It feels like a pause, as you absorb the surroundings. Beautiful! Have fun with the contest! Mikki

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:49:00 AM

    Beautiful! My best wishes in this contest, Andrea! I fell in love with this form! I left a comment below... : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:22:00 AM

    very pretty - I like the sighing, the inevitability of the day ending :)

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:44:00 AM

    When twilight of life comes around and love ones or friends pass away in this world, with sadness we say goodbye to them. Simple verse but with deep thougths in the lines. Andrea, thank you again for your visit. I am very sleepy now but I want to post one poem before I retire tonight. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 10:19:00 PM

    Hello, Andrea, thanks for everything... even that little tiny talk..I' will pray for your dad.. It makes me sad, that i don't know how to feel at this moment... hopefully i will have a nerves breakdown... <---- you see...i'm wishing myself the worst of the worse of the worst.... nice inspiration... I can't remember ever having a sweet day. I don't know about that cold... everthing is always changing around here. One minute it is winter, next it is raininy...lol... take care...pd

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 5:19:00 PM

    oh .. a wonderful delight Andrea.. mesmerizing visuals luv.. good luck in contest.. some poe,s I posted were "just because" holding them for Brian's contest for those short lined ones..luv..

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Nocturnal, I am as well.. I love the night.. SCOOBS and I take long exhausting walks in the dark all the time.. Excellent poem here my friend!!..:JP]

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

    I am a night person and I really enjoyed how you depicted this transition, yes a sweet goodbye, Andrea :) -- I really like how you did your line cuts (ok I don't know if I am using the right term)-- I mean not in the typical three by three lines per stanza-- pretty cool :D-- I hope this places high! Just dropping a quick hi and I hope you're having a great weekend :D hugs to you!!

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Andrea I like the picture you paint here, dark and colourful, congrats om Michaels contest, am away till Tue, will catch up on all your great writes, have a good weekend...David

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:46:00 AM

    Sounds like one reluctant to leave the beach. Super image. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:05:00 AM

    love this atmospheric write, my friend. many congrats on your wins

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:59:00 AM

    very very pretty! lovely imagery!

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:33:00 AM

    Andrea I really like how everything comes together in your poem. Good luck, a winner I think. Anne

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