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goodbye, sweet day

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goodbye, sweet day

Magenta sky
     shines at twilight
as I ponder
how the sun glows
      though night flows in!

Dusk grows colder. . . 

A lone gull’s cry
has me sighing
       goodbye, sweet day.

Written 4/13/12
by Andrea Dietrich

Inspired by nette onclaud's
** THAN-BAUK A TWILIGHT

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Beautiful, Andrea. I've been wanting to write one of these. Yours is lovely. And KOs...3 that I can remember. Funny though, I've not broken many major bones...only 3 fingers, one toe, and a fractured ankle...all in high school sports.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:01:00 PM
    So give me another phrase.................:...

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:36:00 AM
    It is like a song Andrea, so beautiful and so full of colors. Just a few words here and there and it could be a great song. Congrats on your grand win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Andrea D

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:36:00 AM
    It is like a song Andrea, so beautiful and so full of colors. Just a few words here and there and it could be a great song. Congrats on your grand win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Andrea D

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:46:00 PM
    Hi sweetie-- shucks, just dropping in to say that I owe you a ton of mail! My connection is doing that weird thing again?! Being so slow that I can't load my email But I can load Soup pages (even so slow)_-- I don't think I would even be able to comment on everybody in the winners' lists right now-- thanks so much for what you said about my shower poem :) hehe cute rhyming in there-- I will have to catch up on your new poems too! Sorry! Hugs to you sweetie, I better sleep!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 9:00:00 PM
    No cat no dog.......

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:50:00 AM
    One of the forms I have not tried and looks great to me. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:00:00 AM
    Wonderful poem, of good bye of a sweet day, lovely worded, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:36:00 PM
    Very creative and descriptive winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Very original play! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 3:30:00 PM
    lovely andie.. congrats on your win in my contest... magenta sky--what an opening!..:) huggs.. still reeling from events in my life; take care and huggs!

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Great job. I forgot the form and was just reading a bit of poetry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 7:38:00 AM
    Creative! But then, thats no surprise...lol. Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win Andy xx

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 2:06:00 PM
    You wrote a silhouette of Nette's picture. A great TB, Andrea! Alas, good bye sweet day...A crispy ring to it and I know she will really like your format..I yahoo'd u back regarding the S P site...Hugs, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 3:47:00 PM
    With the morning we see the light. As our hearts are reborn with delight. Through out the day we go our way. To find the night lives in disamay.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 2:51:00 PM
    This is a beauty, andrea! It feels like a pause, as you absorb the surroundings. Beautiful! Have fun with the contest! Mikki

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:49:00 AM
    Beautiful! My best wishes in this contest, Andrea! I fell in love with this form! I left a comment below... : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:22:00 AM
    very pretty - I like the sighing, the inevitability of the day ending :)

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