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If You--Would You

If you could read my mind Do you think it would be good? If you could read my mind Would you be doing it more then you should? If you could read my mind Do you think it would change your life? If you could read my mind Would it make you want to be my wife? If you could read my mind Would you understand the expressions on my face? If you could read my mind Would it make the world a stranger place? If you could read my mind Would you be able to feel my heart? If you could read my mind Would you think I'm not that smart? If you could read my mind Would you understand I'm trying to reach you? If you could read my mind Would you realize that I finally got through? I Wonder If You Would?
Dan Kearley:4-13-12

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:00:00 AM
    Wow what if some people could read each other's mind....to me that is definitely two people who have gotten through to each other, however i also think that if someone understands you, feels you and enjoys your presence in this world - it's because they don't need to read your mind to think those things....gr8 poem....excellent - Shaz

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 11:46:00 AM
    If I could read your mind I would probably be asounded; having said that what I do know is you are interesting, fun and sweet. Can't ask for much more than that. Just stay the way you are! :) Luv, Lizzy

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:08:00 AM
    I bet she will .......... Lovely poem with so many questions leading to your heart... and hey thanks for the favourite :)

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Interesting poem... The last line...ouch.

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 3:00:00 PM
    nice piece

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 9:20:00 AM
    Wonderful expression of passion of life with wife. My friend, untrue misses always. Loved your comment and loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Lovely poem and finely structured! :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 7:00:00 AM
    Oh Dan! I have always wondered these same questions. I think for the most part, everyone would think I was an asshole. I NEED that filter that happens before I speak. Btw, isn't there a disease where people don't have that filter? anyway, I can only hope that if this ever happens to me, that my husband would feel the love and not the everyday irritations. Hopefully your wife would too!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 4/17/2012 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha,ha,hahaha..I don't think your an A-hole. :o)
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Wow...great write Dan, nice poem. xoxo - Laila

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 4/17/2012 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks,Laila... :o)
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 2:39:00 PM
    BIG HUG, Dan!!!!! Many questions at onse Dan. - Real LOVE is STRONG love !!! - f.e.f. oxox Anne-Lise

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 4/17/2012 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks,Anne-Lise.. :o) F.e.f oxox
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 12:52:00 AM
    i really like the line "If you could read my mind Would you be able to feel my heart?". nice poem!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 4/14/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! :o) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:49:00 PM
    Dan, I enjoy reading your thoughts. Sure hope you are not serious on some of these questions. I think you are one smart cookie!!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 4/14/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwww,Thank you(blush) :o)
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 4:03:00 PM
    I'm glad you shared this Dan..

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 4/14/2012 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you,Diana :o)