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AN INNOCENCE NEVER SPOILED

Young and platonic
with a certain feeling
purer than mountain's water.

Faces smoother than silk:
a memory of early youth...
an innocence never spoiled.


Entered in Russell Sivey's contest,
" I-6 Lines Of Romance & Love "
Written by Andrew Crisci
4/13/2012

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  1. Date: 4/20/2012 11:12:00 AM

    Two verses where every word is essential. Well crafted, in tone and articulation. Great job, Andrew! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:05:00 PM

    Andrew, this poem is beautiful. Enjoyed. Love, Gail