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Anchored thoughts

Charmaine Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Anchored thoughts which was written by poet Charmaine Chircop. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Anchored thoughts

I see myself dancing out there in the shadow of an ocean Hands free in the air as seagulls surround me Then,I hide with the sun behind a dark cobalt sky I can't see me anymore I vanish,I'm gone Oncemore I find me again through the face of the moon which mirrors each drop of huge savage waves beneath my feet. All alone,scared but not terrified sad but not desperate I sail to the open winds in a ship without sails which sinks in the deep whilst i breathe in empty silence freezing the smile of a lifetime.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:14:00 PM
    Your comment about the Titanic makes it make a lot more sense. I thought the same thing as I was writing stories about it. What would I have done? With that in view, your last several lines in the poem really have a unique meaning.

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 2:09:00 PM
    beautiful work....TAH

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:50:00 PM
    Wonder surrounds you... not only seagulls... Loved it... Terry

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 6:56:00 PM
    drops of huge savage waves beneath your feet..oh, such magic! your lines are flowing like honey! enjoyed. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:56:00 AM
    You must have a Captain ;) nice work.

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:01:00 AM
    lovely ..intense.. romantic.. superb.. will never run out of adjectives to describe your wonderment of writing Charma luv..

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:57:00 AM
    truly beautiful write, my friend

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:40:00 PM
    Very descriptive and full of imagery. Like this one.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:37:00 AM
    Beautiful, had me spinning down the page as I became caught up in the dance of verse! Check out my art work in my blog link. Thanks, Nighttiger.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will Michael.. tnks for stopping by to read my post..Charma
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:30:00 AM
    "I sail to the open winds/in a ship without sails/which sinks in the deep" So sad, Charmaine!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes..but .. i wrote -I'm scared but not terrified...sad but not desperate.. So though sad its hopeful cos I can always freeze the smile in a lifetime. I was inspired by titanic story.. I was thinking of those people and their thoughts in last moments.. and what would i have then in their situation.. I would have thought of the best smile ever and freeze it with me :)
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:16:00 AM
    Lovely images a traveling girl sets sail, enjoyed your verse Charmaine, luv vie

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks sweet Vie
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 8:23:00 AM
    very nice darling.great write.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for supporting my work Elliott