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Father,Son and Me as One

Father, Son and Me as one
Brighter than the noonday sun
The rainbow feeds my eternal soul
The morning sunrise reminds me I'm whole
So as this journey has begun
I hope every day to remember the Father,Son and Me as ONE!

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  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:51:00 AM

    This sounds a bit, dare I say, Gnostic in nature? If its not, you should certainly check out Gnosticism because I get the sense your moving in that direction. But I like it very much, regardless of the philosophical overstones. A very nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Terry

    craig Avatar lisa craig Date: 4/14/2012 6:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your senses are good.Although I do not choose to be tied to any ONE religion, just a seeker of Truth. I like to find the similarities in all of them. I think it is obvious who my favorite Teacher is though. Thank you for your comments I value them .
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 7:05:00 AM

    As Anne Lise said, Beautiful is the word! Keep it up Lisa! - Diana

    craig Avatar lisa craig Date: 4/14/2012 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for all the comments and reading my stuff very valuable to me.
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Just beautiful Lisa !!!! Love it !!! - Have a nice weekend to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

    craig Avatar lisa craig Date: 4/14/2012 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, I love yours too!