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Shine On Moon

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Shine On Moon

"Shine On Moon"


Shine on moon!

I see you up there...
Watching over me,
Back-dropped by the sky
Netted by the sea,
With those eyes--that stare.

I hear you, Moon,
A haunting pull
That beckons me,
Keen as radar*.

I see you
Shinning--Oh!
Bright as Noon!*

...A pip*
To reer*

There...

...There

To reer*
A pip*...

Bright as Noon!*
Shinning--Oh!
I see you

Keen as radar*
That beckons me,
A haunting pull,
I hear you, Moon

With those eyes--that stare
Netted by the sea,
Back-dropped by the sky
Watching over me,
I see you up there...

Shine on moon!


deborah burch
4/12/2012
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For David's "Palindrome Mad" Contest
Palindromes List*:

Entire poem("Shine On Moon"*) is Line unit palindrome* 
radar*
Noon*
pip*
reer*

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  1. Date: 4/24/2012 4:04:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work...Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 6:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:45:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Deb. Outstanding write. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Well done Debs, Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 12:00:00 AM
    Oh I love how you wrote in this form! An excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes...blessings, Rhonda :))

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/13/2012 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh thank you Rhonda...so much...big hug,love deb
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 6:12:00 PM
    Muahhh, that is a kiss...

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/12/2012 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...*blush* thank you for the mighty fine compliment...big huggss,love deb...
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 5:59:00 PM
    a diminished and advancing hexaverse. I invented that form. Yay! Best wishes in the contest. hugs, catie :)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/13/2012 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Catie...:)))
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/12/2012 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yeah, but i didn't figure it out till after your contest...lol you will have to do it again...lol..big huggss,love deb