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  1. Kendrick Avatar
    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/19/2012 4:05:00 PM
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    Good picture and expressive work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats...Sara
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 4/19/2012 3:50:00 PM
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    Very evocative! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 4/19/2012 5:23:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest ~^~Broken Butterfly. Love, Carol
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 4/18/2012 10:53:00 AM
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    Skillfully done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Joseph May
    Date: 4/18/2012 9:41:00 AM
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    congrats on your win
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 4/18/2012 7:40:00 AM
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    Yummy! This is so good. Congrats. BG
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/18/2012 5:49:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win BB xx
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 4/12/2012 9:14:00 PM
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    Wow, that is a tremendous write my friend! I love how you put together your poem! The lines, "past the twilight, the stars bring hang" great lines they really are bringing in the message of twilight! I thoroughly enjoyed your write the I have read this evening! I love your poem very much! Thank you sharing your poem with us all! Great Work!!
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 4/12/2012 8:00:00 PM
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    "the shadow falls/a bird calls sweet/still walls, I build"!! WOW! I love this stanza! Excellent work, Butterfly! A winner in my list! Best of luck in the contest! Ruben.
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 4/12/2012 3:55:00 PM
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    Excellent lines here Broken Butterfly. Best wishes to you in the contest. You're very welcome on your placement in my butterfly kisses contest luv. Love, Gail
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 4/12/2012 2:23:00 PM
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    Beautiful lines, BB! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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    Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/12/2012 2:13:00 PM
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    very lovely BB...:) wonderful flow...good luck in the contest...big huggs,love deb