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A Seed In The Wind

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A Seed In The Wind

~ Years lost, the barren floor a thousand poppies shall live no more through twilight's calm a storm raged on of flickering fire before the dawn Wither o' heights of careless breath the evil wind will give no rest so burn my orange fire burn of death soon rebirth shall find a nest Until that day I stand subdued where painted skies my only muse... ~ Poet-Rick Parise

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Congratulations :-)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:25:00 AM
    This is a fantastic write/piece my dear friend, Rick! Biggest congratulations on your super win! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Excellent visuals and flow, Rick! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:54:00 AM
    Congratulations Rick xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:39:00 PM
    RICK, your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:14:00 PM
    congrats' SandyIvy

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:56:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Rick.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing ^Rick. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 3:45:00 PM
    What you did with this...where you went with it...it's brilliant, Rick. I can see how this would read as a dramatic verse. So many beautiful lnes, my friend, that it's hard to pick a favorite. An extraordinary example for your contest. Well done! Love, Carolyn

    Devonshire Avatar Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 4/13/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Steven Cooke is right about the melody of this poem. That's why I hate trying to write in the same meter all the time. Look at the beautiful melodies that come naturally!
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 12:51:00 PM
    An outstanding read today ^Rick. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Really very beautiful Rick, a wonderful example for your contest, hopefully I can rise to the challenge.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 4:36:00 PM
    May I say, like Steven, I find this quite interesting...I like the order of thought. Thanks for sharing Rick. God bless you.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 1:25:00 PM
    I like this. Interesting write with a nice rythm