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Haiku 14 Swan lake

swan lake

a feather falls 

slowly

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  1. Rhinem Avatar
    John Rhinem
    Date: 5/9/2012 3:46:00 AM
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    Smile ˜ Swans Are Sooo Very Pretty, My Dear Precious Priceless & Beautiful, Beautiful Charmaine * Yet So Are Beautiful White Doves * Tinkerbells & Cinderella's * Poetic Queens In Fairytale Dreams * Then There Is, 'You, The Most Beautiful Girl In The Whole Wide World * My Love Always;'" John!:) ˜
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 4/13/2012 9:45:00 AM
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    My ....my! No wind, no sound...Amazing! Great one, Charmaine. Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love swans and lakes..yes........feathers too
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/13/2012 6:09:00 AM
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    wow,your haiku are falling like glistening snowdrops. I've got to see more.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for your constant support sweet Andrea..Its people like you which fills me with the urge to write..hugs.
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    Jared Pickett
    Date: 4/12/2012 9:21:00 AM
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    This feather has fallen into my hands and I brush it along my face.. Greta write my friend...:JP]

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    am smilin ..Now you're gonna sneeze........achoooooooooo :)
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 4/12/2012 7:53:00 AM
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    we have swans at home in NJ in america Charma luv and they are so elegant and lovely as these words my friend..luv.. hugs..

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I LOVE SWANS ..SOMEHOW SERENE AND SO BEAUTIFUL
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    Raj Dey Ranjan
    Date: 4/12/2012 7:07:00 AM
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    Gorgeous one.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you can picture this.. If you ever need haiku help.. I can help, but there is Deborah and Charles who knows better than i do and i'm sure they be will glad to help,even Ruben can help you.. If you click on Ruben's last poem it describes haiku..Of course if you never did it.. cos i don't know if you ever did..Haiku is nice
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    Charles Henderson
    Date: 4/12/2012 1:29:00 AM
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    I don't know what happened to my first comment but let me do it again. You may have it already but I said that your poem was as quiet as the lake sounds. Very nice.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Charles :)


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