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Haiku 12 Stars twinkle

stars twinkle

in empty distance

my eyes wink

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Stars and the human eye are so different, yet both fascinating. I really lends the charm to this one. Thanks for more stops on my humble page.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:50:00 AM

    I love your "twinkle-wink!" Very well done, Charmaine. Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou teacher :)
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:11:00 AM

    NIce how you related the stars to your sweet eyes.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    my poo poo colour eyes you meant Andrea ?:) thanks for being able to see sweetness in a desert :)
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 2:49:00 PM

    nice image love stars they decorate the sky at night hugs vie

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes they really do don't they?
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:27:00 AM

    Must have been a clear, beautiful sky. One where the moon and all stars are apparent.. Another good one!!:JP}

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    a magical sky Jared
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 7:05:00 AM

    So beautiful.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou.. the universe mesmerize me all the time..