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THE CHASE

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THE CHASE


Dusk you are hard and man, scarred, feels worn, sparred by time. The day turns shy as hues fly fast, moved by night’s wheels. Purple and rose tints God chose, but clouds pose questions.
By Cyndi MacMillan, for Nette Onclaud's Twilight contest, April 11/ 2012 Soup's ridiculous syllable counter says 'scarred' has two syllables- it has one.

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:28:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 3:53:00 PM
    You did alot with these strict reg's Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Very nice. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 3:37:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me.Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest..These are short but not so easy to write..Sara

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:08:00 PM
    Tantelizing write there I like all 3 but the second verse best! [Thanks so much for the nice comment on my butterfly kiss verse..I did not even get an HM. I myself thought it was one of my better writes] Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 11:15:00 PM
    Very nice Cyndi.Best wishes to you.