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About This Poem

spring twilight


Irises gleam
A moonbeam falls
Jasmin blooms

Scenting the air
Blossoms bare pale
And flare in gloam

Crepuscle fire
Sapphire bright
Desire ignite

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  1. Gildersleeve Avatar
    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/24/2013 7:36:00 PM
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    Yasmin this is a beautiful Than-Bauk. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 5/23/2013 10:24:00 PM
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    Both great image and form my dear friend yasmin! A tip-top write indeed! So love it. Hope I've time to learn this form and will try it one day! Thank you so much for sharing and BIG CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win! love lots, Leonora
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    Alfred Vassallo
    Date: 5/22/2013 2:52:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your award with this beautiful style and splewndid words.
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    John Posey
    Date: 5/22/2013 1:39:00 PM
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    You seem to have mastered this unusual form.... COngrats on your win...Jake
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    Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/22/2013 12:46:00 PM
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    Congrats and best wishes S.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 5/22/2013 9:08:00 AM
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    Yasmin, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 7/27/2012 6:05:00 PM
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    Go Yassie [you have your own personal cheering squardrion!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/26/2012 6:24:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placing in Brian's "#190"contest Yasmin. Love, Carol
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 7/22/2012 9:56:00 PM
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    This is inviting ambiance for an evening spring walk...I am ashamed to say that I will have to confer with Mr. Webster on 2 of your fancy words...You are masterful with these triplet haikus! Happy to see u enjoying another win! gwendolen
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 7/22/2012 1:05:00 PM
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    You are very good at composing beauty atop beauty, congrats on your special win Jasmin, stay in the sunshine girl, hugs vie
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:55:00 AM
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    Yas, I just had to visit this one more time...David
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:22:00 AM
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    So many pretty flowers in this memorable than-bauk of yours, Yasmin. Big congrats in Brian's contest.
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    kash poet
    Date: 7/22/2012 2:15:00 AM
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    Congrats on the win Yas.Beautiful poem!
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    Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/21/2012 9:00:00 PM
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    Congrats on your well deserved win, Yasmin.
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 7/21/2012 2:05:00 PM
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    you got me under a spell, mareey!... congrats on your well-deserved award!.. huggs from priya!..:)
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 7/21/2012 10:35:00 AM
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    Beautiful, Yasmin! Congrats to you!! :)) Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 7/21/2012 9:00:00 AM
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    Congratulations, Yassie :) Jag
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    David Williams
    Date: 6/13/2012 7:12:00 AM
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    Yas, congrats on a superb win..David
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 6/12/2012 9:57:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "# 182" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 6/12/2012 4:04:00 AM
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    Awesome write, Yasmin. Congratulations!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:00:00 PM
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    glad to see this yet again in a winners' circle , my little friend. Congratulations!!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 6/11/2012 3:18:00 PM
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    You sound happy and fullfilled!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 6/11/2012 1:02:00 PM
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    Yasmin, a nice wonderful win in Brian's contest... xox~ pd
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:52:00 AM
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    Congrats on your HM for your fine poem... Terry
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/19/2012 4:30:00 PM
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    Very descriptive work.Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats...Sara
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 4/19/2012 3:55:00 PM
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    Wonderful win from a great gal. Congrad's Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 4/19/2012 5:28:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 4/18/2012 11:19:00 AM
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    And I learned a new word. Congratulations, Yasmin. Love, Joyce
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 4/18/2012 8:27:00 AM
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    Yasminovna, Congrats, lend me your brain for a while , jag
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 4/17/2012 11:04:00 AM
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    A romantic and fragrant walk...I could walk this scented trail with my eyes closed and still be enthralled! I like this smashing TB! You went all out, girlie! I think I shall wait on your response over java! Java java java! .......

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 4/17/2012 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh yes, wise and wonderful sensei....I will get my coffee and chk my soupy mail....
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