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Somebody ain't Nobody, Somebody who's me

If i could think with the mind of a wise man If i could stop using this heart which throbs with love,laughter,passion and pain Maybe then...Maybe i would stop thinking of shooting stars,the crescent moon and silver sky Maybe then I would not speak of dandelions, daises,buttercups and butterflies. Maybe then all my gardens and rainbows would disappear. If i could think with the mind of a wise man Maybe then i would stop writing about cascading waterfalls and white swans which pirouette in crystal streams Maybe then there'll be no more mandarine sunsets and maybe then each sunrise would hide behind a shadowed silhouette of black wild hills. Maybe then I would act more like a woman not like a child with innocent dreams balloons and candyfloss kisses All i manage to give you are birds in their nest Melodies of panpipes and the sound of the sea I wish i knew better,I wish i did better I wish i knew how to use bombastic words a wider vocabulary,such as politicians use but that would never be me. I wish that one day i could be that somebody I'm not that somebody who could influence this world of isanity who could stop the bloodshed of brothers and coldness of war who could feed each mouth in Etiopia ,Sudan and much more. But i am a nobody,as simple as a peasent ploughing green fields as usless as dust which get swept by each waft of the wind the same dust you thread upon as you walk with those feet. I wish i was somebody,i wish i could give you better but this is all i have and this is all that's me. I'm sorry !

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:09:00 AM

    What!!! What an unexpected surprise! Your best piece to this day. Length usually turns me away, but scene it was you. I began the first lines. I was dtaged in. The muse had me captured and I let the beauty carry me through as it stayed beautiful all the way through. My best compliment, Repost. Give it to those who missed it like I did. A new fav.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:53:00 AM

    Yeah! I'm sorry too. That there are not enough Poets like you! So CHARMaine this is...Glad you're back in my favorite AVATAR...SO FAR...

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 3:47:00 PM

    This had a big bang effect in my mind.Wow incredible .

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 3:34:00 PM

    My friend from Malta: this piece is outstanding!! You blew my mind with this Charmaine.If we could use poems as weapon,there wouldn`t be much trouble in this world.Hugs from Scandinavia:-)

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:14:00 PM

    I'm speechless!!! Wow!! This poem was well written...beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Nicely written dear poetess. Love this.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Chitta :)
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Love it from the top to the bottom.... beautiful written Charma !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks dear Anne :)
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:31:00 AM

    Jaw dropping.....you're special! Without the big words, it has mass appeal...

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Special is a very big word.. thankyou :)
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:15:00 AM

    Beautifully done Charma...love the perspective....very endearing...big huggsss my friend,love debs

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks dear Deborah:)
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:02:00 AM

    Hello there dear poet ! Such a nice flow of words my friend, yet, the wise are the souls who flow with the words ! Remember that ! And the thoughts you share clearly incite! Have a wonderful week...much love, james

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry that answer wasnt for you james.. oops:)... I want to thankyou for stopping by good friend :)
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maybe i could speak like Obama or Gonzi My Priminister or or Sarkozi :).. that would be very grand
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 9:52:00 AM

    Your heart is so big, dear Charmaine! You dont need bombastic words to write beautiful poetry; and that's why it's so special. Excellent as usual. TMFs! : ) Rubeen

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maybe i could speak like Obama,Gonzi or Sarkozi.. ..:)That would be grand;~) thanks for the favourite much appreciated!