Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

Twilight's Rainbow Skies

 UNSUPPORTED CODE 



Twilight's Rainbow Sky Twilight dreams show Through rainbow sky A soul reborn Twilight rainbow Seen its glow through Dawn's flow of light Dark fades to light Giving life to Sunlight lit skies
Contest: Than- Bauk A Twilight Sponsor: Nette Onclaud By: Gail Doyle

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:13:00 PM

    One of your rhymes is like mine! the glow and flow. I am seeing many people use similar rhymes. It's because this kind of poem is very limited to just a few rhymes!! Yours is very nice, Gail. Good luck in the contest.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 4/13/2012 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, I think you're right. The poems are very limited to certain rhymes in the contest. You're in wonderful as well. Best wishes to you also. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Thank you for your kind comment Gail!winning wishes to you with this poem!take care,have a great weekend.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 3:23:00 PM

    Dear Gail, thanks for the comment. I changed my title. I saw others that said exactly what you wrote in the contest: "scary, suspenseful." You might consider posting a blog for those of us who misunderstood. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Still beautiful Gail, I fixed my title but I did not want to give the story away in the title so I hope it is acceptable, I misread the instructions, your contest is quite wonderful, gives me a chance to spread my writing wings . . .

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:07:00 AM

    This is beautiful. It goes along amazingly with the beautiful photo too. One of my favorites (: ~ Jess

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:17:00 AM

    What a fabulous photo, Gail. Your lovely thanbauk describes it perfectly. Best wishes in the contest! (Hope the title on my entry to your contest is okay. Did you really want either "scary" or "suspense" as the title, or do you want titles that are scary or suspenseful?" Love, Carolyn

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 4/13/2012 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carolyn, thank you for enjoying my Twilight Rainbow Skies poem. As for my contest I'm looking for titles that sound scary or suspenseful Love, Gail
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 2:21:00 PM

    Your Than Bauk is lovely Gail, best of luck in the contest and thanks for my placement in your A Butterfly Trail of Kisses Contest, that was a nice contest, I am very happy.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:41:00 PM

    superbly crafted lines of delightful imagery Gail.. much success in contst luv.. thankxx for honoribg my poem with a first place win.. I luv butterflies and luv .. two together ..a pair of joyful visions.. thankxx for a great honor luv..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 2:54:00 PM

    There is only one word to say Gail : WONDERFUL !!! - Wish you winning luck!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 4/11/2012 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thank you for your inspiring comment on my poem Twilight's Rainbow Skies. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 11:12:00 AM

    Such a beauty Gail..thanks for sharing -cHARMA

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 4/11/2012 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Charmaine, thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem Twilight's Rainbow Skies. Love, Gail
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:12:00 AM

    A beautiful picture of twilight you have written. I was confused whether to write one long poem or three short ones.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 4/11/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann, thank you for your comment on my poem Twilight's Rainbow Skies. Love, Gail