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Love over the seas

Love over the seas  


Love  over  the  seas,
I  catch cold when you just sneeze
Flu is yours,  its fever mine.
Bond of  heys and hugs,
Beyond  fond.  Enough of this, 
Can’t wait; It's time we got real.


S.Jagathsimhan Nair,
11  apr  2012
For:  Russell’s ‘Romance and love’  contest
Form:  SEDOKA

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  1. Date: 4/17/2012 7:19:00 PM

    yours was sure cute. Congrats on your placement.

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 5:58:00 AM

    This is a great sedoka!congrads to you Jag!love the last line!wow!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:03:00 PM

    Jag, this is just fabulous! Love how you used sedoka as your vehicle for this intense message! Congrats..You and Yas have me laughing with your competitiveness here! Love, Gwendolen ps...hope u made it home safely from travels

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 5:51:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Jag. Awesome. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Ralph

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:06:00 PM

    Jag, congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 8:18:00 AM

    congrats Jag on a splendid write aned win for these magnificent words as always luv..

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 6:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win Jag xx

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 4:43:00 AM

    Congratulations Jag on your win!! what an awsome write...well done! big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Like Yasmin says, it's cool and creative!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 4:17:00 PM

    coolest poem I ever read!great creative stuff,looks like its gonna beat mine!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Lovely and sweet.. for better for worse..so it seems.. achoooooooo :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:28:00 AM

    Clever write Jag!!! Good luck in the contest my friend...big huggsss,love debs