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Gone 2

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Gone 2

Gone 2

My lights are on
But I'm not home
I've gone to look for me.
It's on my own
That I have gone
In hopes of finding me.
I don't recall
The time at all
When I began to seek,
Or from the wall
The picture fall
That kept me on my feet.
I only know
As on I go
If you run into me...
Just say, "Hello."
And gently show
The pathway back to me.

deborah burch©
4/11/2012

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  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 10:21:00 PM
    Deborah, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/12/2012 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much PD...this was fun...the other poets participating in the fun in looking for me was such a treat! lol...I look forward to eventulally becoming a PM and doing contests, too...in the meantime y'all are doing a fabulous job!!!! big hugggsss,much love...deb
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 1:57:00 PM
    Hello Deborah ;-) hmmm I really enjoyed helping you find yourself lol hope your weeks been a good one! Love Wilma

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/12/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...Big Hugss Wilma!! thank you so much ;) love, deb
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Hello! Here you are! : ) This is so wonderful! I love it. To my FAVs! Ruben.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...I am so glad you like it...thank you so much my friend...and for pointing out where I am... ;) love,deb
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 3:12:00 PM
    Hello......................... wish you luck in contest!................ - oxox Anne-Lise..........see you.................hello

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 9:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL...Anne Lise ....you are so very funny !!! Thank you for this laugh my dear friend :D and all your warm wishes...may the return overflowing to you,love deb...thanks for playing :D
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Deb,,, hello, while you are searching for youself, have you thought about entering my contest, if you already have not,,David

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 11:25:00 AM
    We all are in need of another to find ourselves,so it seems dear..We are all walking our path in that tunnel with light in the end.. So don't give up..keep in search and many treasures you'll find whilst you're there..Charma

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 10:40:00 AM
    Alrighty..this way.See that pathway?Yep,there you go! You`re on the right path now my dear..lol Hugs and Love

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LMBO!! too funny Arild! thank you so much for the gentle directions...*whew* it was scary there for a while...lol..big huggsss,love deb
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Hello, Debs, you r on the right path..don't look back, jag

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL...thank you Jag!!!huggs,love deb:)
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:18:00 AM
    I like deb, I think we bumped into one another, on that highway. The one down street, see I'm lost again!

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You so funny!!! ;) Big Huggsss, my friend!!!love,deb
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 6:56:00 AM
    Sounds like you shoulda stayed in bed Debs lol...Nice write xxx Hugs

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...what can I say Tracie...'some days are diamonds...some days are coal'...lol big huggsss girl!!! love deb