Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

On Journeys Of The Heart

Deborah Burch Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled On Journeys Of The Heart which was written by poet Deborah Burch. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Deborah Burch

Best Deborah Burch Poems

+ Fav Poet

On Journeys Of The Heart

On Journeys Of The Heart


Lost and wandering in the dark
Bereft of any map or mark
Futile efforts fail at embark
On journeys of the heart.

Vain travailings silent, unheard
Are bound beneath unspoken words
Repressing what could still be stirred
On journeys of the heart.

Still faint intrepid thoughts unfurl
Mangled within a broken world
Pacing relentless in this pearl
On journeys of the heart.




Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 9:01:00 PM
    Indeed the rimester ye be... thoughts to pen set free....

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:17:00 PM
    Very insightful poem by you.Congrats on your win.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:18:00 PM
    writing end rhyme is very hard for me without it getting sing songy. But your refrain has taken most of that away. I would say this is about as good a balance as i have seen for rhyme yet subdueing it to an acceptable level. I think I will try a few like this if I can come up with some good theme. thank you for postisng

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/12/2012 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Charles...I am honoured...I am anxious to see the results...very best wishes, huggs,love deb
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:17:00 PM
    "Are bound beneath unspoken words/ Repressing what could still be stirred"! Wonderful lines! Very well written, Deborah! Ruben.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 8:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awww*blush* thank you Ruben...big huggss,love deb
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 7:20:00 AM
    lovely write, my friend. many congrats on your wins

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/11/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kindness, Jack...big hugs,love debs