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Flee, flea, flee

                    .                     .       
        .                        .      ^  ^
.  flea landed on fluffy cat  >0.0< .    
                                                          ^  ^
                             ^ ^                       _0.0_               . 
sour puss snarled >~.~<  said, "Bite >(\/\/\/)< me!"                             .
flea took one sip, and then gagged~.           .
Yuck! (o.0) ! Vinegar blood :p!   .   .     .
.  flea said to self: "Flee, flea, flee!!!!" ~ ~ ~.    ^ > .  >  . ^. ^ > .        .    ^   .
                           .   .         .
^. jumped high ! .       .    . . jumped .    . .low ! for new blood .      .      .      .   . 
                                   .                   .                                             .  .
                                                                                        .    .   .
                                                .              .                  .
hit jackpot on two sweeties:      .      .        .    .           .
.                         .              .            .   .        .      .
  .  .  .  Gautami .   .  .Tirzah!!                            .
^_^   ^_^

--nikko for Linda's Bite Me contest :D


*** dear reader, heehee please do not diss my cat,
 I worked So hard for that cat! when I Should be doing something else...haha
I love that cat now ^_^. 
Yup! That was supposed to be the cat
 (in case you get puzzled what those symbols were in my 1st & 2nd lines...).
  & lol admittedly, I went a bit(?) dotty here (flea to blame) lol...Thank you. :D

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:02:00 PM

    LOL...Nikko. I got a tick, I mean kick out of this one.. I have 2 pups, and thanks God, i can not see all them dots under their fur.. thank you for the comment... xox~PD

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 9:53:00 AM

    brilliant nikko, enjoyed this , harry

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Pesky critters sure create havoc when embedded in fur. Hope you solved the situation Nikko. All the best in the contest! :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:02:00 PM

    Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Nikko. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Wow! Look at all of those fleas jumping around in this dodoittybittyitso! Thank you so much for writing this!

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 6:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your First Place in Linda-Marie's Contest, Nikko! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 3:48:00 AM

    Yay, nikko,,Congrats... this cute and adorable one flies to the top!!! Gosh, didn't we all enjoy writing our wacky pieces for Linda's contest.. now I'm having great fun reading them all..Enjoy, have a lovely sunday!!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:12:00 AM

    Vinegar blood! So sour! Maybe I have this type because mosquitoes do not bite me in the Philippines. This is a fun read for me tonight. I just renewed my premium membership so I plan to be around PS. It is so fun to be a member of this community. What is the color of your cat? Any new interesting blog of yours lately?? I have not been following any contest recently. Gaya mo, busy lagi. At saka spring na dito, just cleaned my garage today. Miss ko na ang Pinas!! I am expecting a friend from RP on the 2nd of May. Sige ingat! I will drop by/stop by again next time. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 1:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win nikko, been on the bottled water again lol xx

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 10:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your first win with excellent shape poem! I am in awe of your Kitty. I don't think I have the patience to even attempt something like this. Well done!! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:46:00 PM

    Yours was sure fun, Nikko!! Big congrats.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:44:00 PM

    Congratulations Nikko on tlhis great bite. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:37:00 PM

    I hate have no idea how much I hate fleas, Nikko...My entire home has had them for over a carpet, tried every trick in the book!....Got any ideas?...ha ah I am soooooooo excited to read this creative winner! how you livened up the contest with this buggy piece! One of a kind! Love, your bday sista! GWendolen

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:57:00 PM

    Congratulations Nikko!! on your win! I love what you did with the page layout!! What an awsome difference...WELL DONE...big hugs,love deb (all those dot-fleas make me

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:24:00 PM

    cxongrats Nikko on a super duper first place win for this super duper entry luv..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:44:00 AM

    hahaha, I hope you can do two at once. that was one hungry critter!!! that dang flea. You chose two delightful poets to bite,NIkko. Luv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:55:00 PM

    hmmmm why would we diss your cat Missy?hehe, gosh I enjoyed your animation with this one lol ;-) now I am glad I decided to bite you :D *mwahugs*

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:15:00 AM

    still smilin about the cat.. and this is my oink 8@) :)hehe

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 2:36:00 AM

    Aw nikko, your cat!! I could not not tease your cat a bit more, so... now I'm not sure if it's me or the gnat who's being more pesky:D and I had to add your cat symbol there, looked so incomplete without ^.^ cute cat, cute nikko.. a nice pair!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Cute-Cat-Nikko!! : ) A very creative presentation! My best wishes in Linda-Marie's contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 3:27:00 PM

    Nikko...I have to admit: Your creativity,(with the dots&that!) amazes me to the fullest:---->>>)) Have a great day:)

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:47:00 PM

    hehhehehe :) I can see the cat Nikko.. funny you me smilin.. Your breaktime is over and its time for me to shower,watch some telly and rest....See you later sweet jelly bean :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:47:00 AM

    :-)!!!!!! This is an interesting poem Nikko! The uniqueness makes it wonderful.. It is good to see you again my friend!!! Jared Pickett

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:27:00 AM

    hee hee great entry Nikko luv.. good luck.. wow I am going to go ku ku ku like Tracie's contrest says to juge my own luv.. now ledt Gautami and Tirzah know they have been "bitten" please.. going to post a final list in a little while.. need Mr. Ron to help me out.. be home from work shortly luv.. oh..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 7:35:00 AM

    lol, had a chuckle at this one, nikko. poor cat with all those little hoppers. many congrats on your wins - i knew nette would love your wonderful jesus poem, as i did

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:59:00 AM

    Nicely done nikko, like it!!! Luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 2:43:00 AM

    wheee, nikks!... this piece just glides with kinetic energy; i like "hit jackpot on two sweeties:".. didn't t know that was coming... panalo!.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:59:00 AM

    Too funny luck in the contest...big huggsss,love deb

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:47:00 AM

    darling nik-nuk,, I haven't been so amused in a long time.. hahahah!!! I'm grinning, my widest grin right now, thanks for directing this 'fleeing flea' towards us. But I'd hold you before me saying " flea, she's the sweetest, as sweet as honey, and before you think of biting her; shoooo... just flee!!"