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Patience when in LOVE

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Patience when in LOVE



What remedy is there to take the pain away?
I'm sick inside and its killing me that I only hear from you once a day.
Surely you can do something so I won't feel this way.
Seconds, minutes, to hours, I find myself still waiting by the phone.
Of course time is valuable when you have a house of your own.
All I can think of is you and I left all alone.
I sometimes question if I need words of affirmation
Or just simple words of confirmation.
And no, no, no; I'm not lacking determination.
You and only you is all I think of.
Patience is truly a virtue coming from above.
But, when I have you all to myself, there's going to be more than LOVE.


"An old piece"

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  1. Date: 6/10/2014 2:14:00 PM

    Through your poem I re-experienced many of such troubling circumstances, only to be reconciled with my realization of how precious life energy is and how useless to give it with nothing in return. Well written.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 9:37:00 PM

    I know the feeling.......you have to be in a love to write a poem like that. May she reciprocate your deep feelings.

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:30:00 PM

    Wow omg!i really love this poem!it has bought a smile to my face!great job

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:13:00 AM

    This old piece got me all smiles.. How come I can identify with this gem? hmmm let me not delve into that question.. enjoyed it Pace :)

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 11:33:00 PM

    Very nice! You write very well! And a big thank you to all the help you have been to me!:)

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 9:03:00 PM

    Was this poem for me? *batting eyes* lol!! I am kidding but I Wish it was :-) Super clever and nicely written...hope whoever the subject was is grateful.

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:57:00 AM

    G Pace, wow... your pen is mighty clever here... glad you know how to take charge.... see you around.... xox~pd

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:33:00 AM

    "Greatly thought out lovely peice... but not as lovely as you.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww..thank you so kindly Carma!! Thank you for checking out my work!! All smiles
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 9:51:00 PM

    This is a poem from the heart, G. I totally know where you're coming from in it. An old but wonderful piece!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/23/2012 3:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by!!! Smiles
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Wow, I can really feel your passion. Any advice on making my poetry better

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All smiles!! Thanks
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 7:30:00 AM

    nice piece!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 1:26:00 PM

    good write G

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate it!! Thanks
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Direct, no cut or nothing...this was suspenseful.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/17/2012 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!