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A time when you could eat the sun

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A time when you could eat the sun

The trees are made of feathers and sticks
The sun is made of golden cheese
The moon was made of whipped cream
A place where the water was made out of blue Kool- Aid
The grass was made of gummy green strings
There was no houses and no place to hide
A place where a boy ate the sun
A place where the Moon swalloed up the world
A tragedy that melted and turned to liquid
No one could swim in the sea
No one could tan underneath the branches
A world where time stood still and the hours were long
A place where humans never existed

"Please Try to Go Beyond Earth Hour"
Treat earth like something you imagined when you were a kid a place where these things happened and you could be safe. Pick up your trash and clean up your yard! after all this is your world too :)!

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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:11:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:27:00 AM

    congrats on the contest placement.. WHAT AGR8 WAY TO APPROACH THE THEME!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:26:00 AM

    congrats on the contest placement

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 6:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Shayla. Love, Carol

    Dendinger Avatar Shayla Dendinger Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Shayla xx

    Dendinger Avatar Shayla Dendinger Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:28:00 AM

    Shayla congrats on your win..David

    Dendinger Avatar Shayla Dendinger Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you :D