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A time when you could eat the sun

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Below is the poem entitled A time when you could eat the sun which was written by poet Shayla Dendinger. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A time when you could eat the sun

The trees are made of feathers and sticks
The sun is made of golden cheese
The moon was made of whipped cream
A place where the water was made out of blue Kool- Aid
The grass was made of gummy green strings
There was no houses and no place to hide
A place where a boy ate the sun
A place where the Moon swalloed up the world
A tragedy that melted and turned to liquid
No one could swim in the sea
No one could tan underneath the branches
A world where time stood still and the hours were long
A place where humans never existed

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  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:11:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:27:00 AM
    congrats on the contest placement.. WHAT AGR8 WAY TO APPROACH THE THEME!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 9:26:00 AM
    congrats on the contest placement

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Shayla. Love, Carol

    Dendinger Avatar Shayla Dendinger
    Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 5:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Shayla xx

    Dendinger Avatar Shayla Dendinger
    Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:28:00 AM
    Shayla congrats on your win..David

    Dendinger Avatar Shayla Dendinger
    Date: 5/11/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :D