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The other me

There's so much i want to 
say but am scared to give 
away every little secret that 
i hide behind. There's 
another world inside of me 
that u may never see. 
Somewhere in these paper 
doll silhouttes, there's a 
light that i cant find. Maybe 
am blind or maybe its too 
far away.               I have 
climbed the wall, i can see 
the edge but i cant take the 
fall...

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  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:32:00 PM

    i love this..love the mood and your style..you first poem,hmm..you would really go far here

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:35:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Cynthia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Open honesty overflowing..It touched me. Diana Mohammed

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 6:26:00 AM

    Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara