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Titanic Forever

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Titanic Forever

My father had been out of work for way too long.
At night, I often heard him and mom weep
Food was scant, but love was strong. 
As was that hunger pain when I lay to sleep.

My little brother was too young to understand.
Still a babe in arms, he brought our only smiles.
I loved to play with him and hold his tiny hand.
It seemed to take away the hurt from life trials.

Then, one-day dad came home all excited.
He was talking so fast, grinning from ear to ear.
He said that our future was well fated.
That we were in for adventure was clear.

It was that new ocean liner, the Titanic. 
Dad had been hired for the maiden voyage.
We were going along as his sidekick.
A family destined for American homage.

In just five days we boarded that ship.
Immigrating was a dream come true.
Accommodations would be a hardship.
But it was worth opportunities…new.

Dad worked as a scullion in the restaurant.
We were housed on the lower deck.
It was a very crowded lodgment.
We stayed together until the shipwreck.

Sirens were screeching people screaming.
We could not find dad anywhere.
Was he locked up as a cageling?
Could it be true; was he trapped down there?

Lifeboats were being lowered.
Mom held my brother, crying.
Dad must be somewhere cloistered.
We all feared a dreadful dying.

Someone put me in a lifeboat.
I reached for mom as it descended.
The Titanic was still afloat.
But my family separated.

The water was freezing.
I had forgotten my coat.
People crying, sniffling, and sneezing.
The lifeboat soon became an iceboat.

Within a few hours, death began.
Shivering, I crawled beneath two corpses.
A young girl destined to live without her clan.
Hidden from polar breezes.

That was the last time I saw my mother.
My mind holds the image clearly.
She, calling for dad, was cuddling brother.
Oh, how I loved my family dearly.

When rescuers finally arrived.
I was the only one alive in the lifeboat.
Beneath those bodies, I survived.
Then, I was wrapped in a warm coat.

I never did see America.
I was sent to an orphanage back home.
Life had dealt a great trauma.
Forever had sunken in the ocean's foam.

© April 9, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  My heart will go on and on.... Free Poetry 
Sponsor	Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver

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  1. Date: 4/20/2012 6:19:00 PM
    So realistic Danie! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:42:00 PM
    congrats Dane Ann on a magnificent write and win for this tale of the Titanic ..luv..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 9:40:00 AM
    Dane Ann congrats on your win, loved it..David

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:22:00 AM
    very touching .good write..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:00:00 AM
    A moving piece Dane love it and congratulations xx

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 6:19:00 AM
    I'm sinking with titanic dear dany .. reading this emotional post.Going to my favs..

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:48:00 AM
    This Made My Heart Sink Deep Down Through The Back Of My Throat.