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BUMbly Bee Bites back bzzzzzzzzzzzz

Got ya! with glass jars in hand Fresh honey,still on those lips Now bite me, You can't! I can !! So better hide boy! Dare you again come so near ? Nose close,disturbing my nest Darn... I'm invading your ass Run Souperrrrrr Run.. Run...
BZZZZZZZZZ :) For Linda Marie's contest 'Bite Me' :) Charmaine Chircop

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Charmaine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 9:20:00 AM

    Congrats on your fantastic win with this adorable bite Charma! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:00:00 AM

    YAY!!!!!!!! : ) Congratulations on your superb win in Linda-Marie's Contest, Charmaine! ......Still running...........Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Yay! ! thanks so much Ru bee!! Of course you kept running to come First..Congrat.to you too..Had to come here to thank Linda and all my friends.Partcipating was fun!Coming Second was yeppy happy! :)bzzzzzz
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 4:09:00 AM

    Love this funny bug piece, Charmaine. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Huggs, gautami

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Gautami.bzzzzzzzzzzzz :)
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 1:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win Charmaine xx

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks sweet Golden gIRL.......BZZZZZZZZZZZZ :)
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 11:10:00 PM

    Charma, a super congrats!!! this was a fun contest... good night ;-) xox~PD

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks dear friend Pd.Participating was already a win on myself fore me.I find it hard to participate in competitions ..Its only my second one in 3 yrs...Placing was an extra unexpected bonus.. I did enjoy reading all the other bzzzzz poems too .. Thanks for stopping by :)Hugs
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Loved this entry for the intense energy it exudes, Charmaine...Great job! Congrats on your buggy win! Gwendolen

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tHANKS SWEET GWEMDOLEN..BZZZZZ :)
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:47:00 PM

    COOL win, Charma! congratulations.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks sweet andrea.. Participating was already a win on my self for me.. Placing was an unexpected bonus.. am happy like a kid... and i did enjoy all other bzzzzz poems including yours.. Hugs.
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Congratulations Charmaine. Love, Joyce

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much sweet joyce
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:00:00 PM

    lol...Congratulations Charma on your win!! well done...big huggs,love deb

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :) thankyou Deb
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:26:00 PM

    congrats Charma on sweet success for this super duper entry luv.. sensational ..

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Participating was fun for me and a win on myself re competitions... My placement was an extra added bonus which made me happy yepppppppyyyyyyyyy.......... bzzzzzzzzzzz :).Just logged for two mins ,i have my cousin's wedding tonight so i soon dissapear but i ll keep in touch......Many hugs and thanks Sweet Linda
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:52:00 PM

    Haha yupppp-- the ears went right ahead :D hahaha! I knew it :D Cheshire cat indeed :p o_O

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahahhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaha :) you made me smile Nikko...Congrat on your big win in the bee bite contest.....and Congrat to the cat too bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:51:00 PM

    ^ ^ >0.0< <------I wonder if this will post properly? yay that you saw my cat-- Probably not! It is like the cheshire cat ;) heehee ok I really got to go, have a wonderful day sweet lucky Charma :D hugs to you sweetie :D I will catch up on your other poems soon!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:44:00 PM

    This is so fun and playful Charma! Really enjoyed this one-- yup I agree, "Run Rubeen run!!!" Smiles and hugs to you :D ok my break is over :D

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 7:12:00 AM

    Really very sweet 'BITE' .

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much chitta
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:02:00 PM

    This is not my sweet Maltese dove....this is a proctologist-owl! : )

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Owl with big claws and popped large eyes... :)coooooo
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 8:46:00 PM

    >.............................running.................>

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 4:31:00 PM

    hahaha, invading your ass sounds so funny!!! I really enjoyed this, Charma. Luv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:14:00 PM

    laughing trip for me, charmaine... what a trap!...winning streaks for you with hugggs!:)

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 10:43:00 AM

    HA Ha.. love it, and i see you bite right back..i love your humor... ha ha..i can't stop laughing at the invading part... good luck in the contest..always...pd

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Charma, ...poor Rubin,.. but a powerful write..listen to Linda and earn a top spot, But I love this one even as it is, luv, jag

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:17:00 AM

    thankxx for supporting my crazy contest Charma luv.. type your name on entry please..and u need to incorporate the words "bite me" into one of the lines sweets.. good luck.. bet Ruben ran for cover ..haha..kuv..it..

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/15/2012 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Linda
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 7:50:00 AM

    VERY COOL < VERY COOL ! Original and BRAVE!!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 5:07:00 AM

    Charmaine! Thanks for stopping over to read my latest and I think I like yours for its energy much much more! It is playful and daring...do not mess with them bumbly bees...Ruben will be delighted as well...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Cute one Charmaine, enjoyed it have a good day hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Smile ~ Would that be with tongue or nose? Hahaha ~ My precious sweeet baby, i love your pretty humour and yesss, Ruben, deserves your beauties, bumble bee sting... Haha, my love ~ Always & forever, John!:) ~

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 2:34:00 PM

    Very articulate..