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Lord, Let Me Rise

Lord, let me rise above this mess Of too much toil and ugliness All around this world I see Lost and lonely souls like me… Struggling, striving, digging, diving Deep into memories long path; Lord, show me the Way Where loveliness lay High above trees and grass. Give me a sign I’m Meant to climb From the valley down below; To that place within where Love begins And seeds begin to grow.

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  1. Date: 4/8/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Well done Terrell. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Martin Avatar Terrell Martin Date: 4/9/2012 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne. And I love your poem about Cleopatra. Simply stunning...Terry
  1. Date: 4/7/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Well penned. I love the part ''Meant to Climb''.....enough said!

    Martin Avatar Terrell Martin Date: 4/9/2012 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Scribe. Nice piece on the Pyramids as well. Terry
  1. Date: 4/7/2012 2:17:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Wonderful Prayer & Hopefully His Beauty Shall Give Your Precious Heart A Sign * Although We Walk By Faith Not By Sight ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜

    Martin Avatar Terrell Martin Date: 4/9/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John, thanks very much for your comments. Best regards, Terry