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You came like the rain

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You came like the rain

The dead leaves were sparkled;

the splash of rain colored with life.

My barren heart found an immigrant's 
Love,

a sea of desire ruffled with inspiration.

My hands reached for eternity

years of isolation was broken.

Life's meaning was fulfilled.

You came like the Rain

with utmost joy I welcomed You

showered you with all my truism.

But desert is a place for cactus,

love bleeds in my heart.

Heathen Heart and  Heathen soul

they said, 'It was  a storm'...

Redfiery @ 2012,

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:02:00 PM
    Good metaphor here! I have a number of Cacti myself. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:03:00 AM
    You are really coming into your own like the symphony when they hit the heart string note.

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Written with your heart and soul,dear Red.Love the open emotions in this very nice poem.Its great seeing you again,been awhile since I saw you here:-) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Red, passing storm or not, the words just flow wonderfully, I like it a lot..love David

  1. Date: 5/25/2012 11:44:00 AM
    ... Yesss, the storm of the century, upon century, but, the sun shines as the clouds surely must part, dear beautiful lady ... John's on his way to Ireland and mentioned unto myself that your priceless beauty had blessed himself with your lovely visit ... Thought i would stop by to see how come, your name lingers upon his heart ... Very touching poe; and now i know ... Love, tristen :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:03:00 PM
    Smile ˜ I have been searching for You, my sweet beautiful lady * Smashing the lamp unto the floor; come here, my beautiful luv ˜ Always, John!:) ˜

    temple Avatar tristen temple
    Date: 5/25/2012 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ... You crack me dear John :)
  1. Date: 4/23/2012 11:35:00 AM
    hmmm....good or bad storm, I can't decide?? Like your metaphors ....enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 5:47:00 PM
    I enjoyed our inspiratinal love poem. Great reading it tonight.

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 1:52:00 PM
    I loved reading your poem today! Good job!