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  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:34:00 PM
    Charma, I responded to your blog comment regarding your haiku example. As you will see in my reply, I am more of a disciple than a teacher, but see your haiku example as going in a similar direction of style that I will be using in the future.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/11/2012 3:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I answered Chris the disciple :)
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Oh shucks, this just gripped me and I felt I was walking along with you-- stirring thoughts you have here, and yes sometimes, it's just so meaningful to try to go back in time.... I love how you termed it "anti-clockwise" btw :D I hope you had a wonderful and blessed Easter dear friend :D Hugs to you! :D

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 7:49:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 10:17:00 PM
    Nice and beautiful.

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 8:37:00 PM
    Great lines Charmaine, this has an irrisistable beat and a haunting message that sticks in the mind. Great write that I really enjoyed! :)

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 8:43:00 AM
    an ultimate expression with pertinent rhyme to upbeat the emotion of intense drama ..u are feeling Charma sweets... have a happy life without strife.. past things suffice.. new things ignite .. luv and joy always..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 8:24:00 AM
    "there's no way/to the left/to the right /where to go /where to hide/ through the day/through the night"! I can relate to these lines, dear Charmaine. This poem speaks to me and "And i think not to think"...Wonderful write as usual. To my FAVs. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 5:31:00 PM
    the poem builds up a good tempo to keep the reader absorbed and then suddenly says bye leaving u feeling nice and cool, well done, Charma, jag

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 9:02:00 AM
    I loved everything except the ending. because it sounded like you were going to some place bad. and it was building, building, building; i was captivated. and then those last three lines. soup mail

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/4/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John nothing is bad.. its just a poem ,with an ending of a kiss and holding hands :)
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 8:59:00 AM
    Charma, I love this style where your lines are really short. reminds me of a quick sweet walk! Yes, deleting poems is something i rarely do and i feel bad for the ones who did it and later regretted it. so you are Sunday's child, huh? Your May day birthday is wonderful too. I got born on LABOR day hahaha.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/4/2012 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes I got born on labor day....Work work and more work :) Lol.............
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Charma, this poem moves along at a good pace. Maybe your anti-clockwise walk is different than mine? I am mainly referring to the lines dealing with "rewind". I enjoyed how you added a bit of rhyme here and there, without over-doing it. Very strong theme going on here.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/4/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mine doesn't have a ( - ) in that's a bit different i guess,lol :).I don't know where your rewind leads you Chris..We definitely all have our stories.Hope yours lead to nice memories :)
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 7:45:00 AM
    I would have to agree with Bombardieri on this one. This is well written. Love this poem.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 6:46:00 AM
    I love the imagery and the way you express this special moment Charmaine, it's like taking a walk in your mind love and light vienna