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PAST TRAUMA

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Below is the poem entitled PAST TRAUMA which was written by poet Eric Zivanai. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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PAST TRAUMA

Gazing at my past,
amazing how victory has come so vast
chasing dreams fast, 
enemies have crowded my life like a movie 
cast
misery drafted its wrath,
my black history has paved a path

A road filled with deep potholes
find myself crucified by my own at the 
crossroads
A torment I fail to forget, Like a gamblers last 
bet

I walk amongst the blind, I talk to those who 
fail to find
burden's in my circumference, My whole life 
is turned to nonsense
An unwelcomed conscience,

signs of haste 
occupy me.
I am gazing at my past, WHERE WILL YOU FIND 
ME???  

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Most would consider this script to be a poem,... but i was simply just writting down my life, my trials, my pain and my hopes.... thanks for the views and comments.... I will be publishing too so look out for that as wee.. God bless u guys

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured this week, and on an excellent piece, also. - Chuck

    Zivanai Avatar Eric Zivanai
    Date: 4/15/2012 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS MAN, GOD BLESS YOU
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:56:00 PM
    Fantastic is right. You know poetry and poetry knows you.

    Zivanai Avatar Eric Zivanai
    Date: 4/15/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS MAN,... GOD BLESS U.. I APPRECIATE IT
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 7:01:00 AM
    fantastic poem and congrats on feature.. Patrick

    Zivanai Avatar Eric Zivanai
    Date: 4/15/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK U PATRICK,.. GOD BLESS U
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 2:54:00 AM
    You made a very nice poem for a past trauma, Eric. Thanks for sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:39:00 AM
    a nice recollection of the past Eric just keep them poems coming. Welcome to PS!!!