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Road to Redemption

What I would give to have lived during Your time,
it makes me wonder...would I have believed?
Water into wine, what a moment sublime,
touching your garments, would healing I receive?

Up that sycamore fig, I would also climb
heed Your parables; be at Mt. Olives.
Would I be like Peter, and falter at sea?
Would I fall asleep at Gethsemane?

With each step You took towards Calvary,
after the mocks, scourges and crown of thorns,
under the heat of that sun, where would I be?
I wonder, would I have walked with You, or scorn?

My soul aches, as my heart answers honestly...
I fall on my knees, and ask to be reborn.
Keeping vigil by the Cross, with candles lit,
thankful for Easter—redemption for spirit.








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--nikko palmario

** trying to hit two birds with one (poetic?) stone here, I hope it’s ok :)

** for  Linda’s Easter Inspirations contest  :) and 
          nette’s Moment in Another time contest :)

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  1. Date: 4/13/2012 2:34:00 PM

    I think you would be there but hidden my sweet little mischievious one. [But HE would know you were there] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 2:02:00 PM

    This is most beautiful in content, enjoyed it greatly congrats on your win Nikko, hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Moment In Another Time" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 10:10:00 AM

    congrats sweet friend Nikko on a suprb write and win for one moment in another time.. always fantastic words .. elegant on this theme luv..

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 7:02:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Easter Inspiration" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 3:03:00 AM

    gawwd, you nailed it, nikko ( oops for the pun)... intense yet delicate!.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 1:23:00 AM

    Congratulations nikko this is a beautiful poem xx

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:08:00 AM

    I would not be surprised in anyway if your entry is topnotch Nikko. Very well-done and heartfelt verses all the way through. Kumosta na? I miss PS for quite sometime. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 3:16:00 PM

    Hello "Nikko The Sweet". And very Happy day after Easter to you!! Glad you liked my poem on jealousy. Your comments only prove your above nickname Love n hugs throughout the day and night for you. Michael the average lol

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 12:09:00 PM

    A well deserved win my dear Nikko! Yes,this is indeed one briliant write,its awesome all the way through.Your spiritual side reflects so much in this poetry.Hugs coming your way! Arild

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 11:00:00 AM

    " I wonder, would I have walked with you, or scorn"? that's monumental! Brilliantly worded....

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Poetry at its best Nikko, Emotional, full of meaning and personal. I felt your words each step of the way and the last verse brings me to where I want to be. So full of meaning and glad you have a well deserved win! Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 3:43:00 PM

    Nikko.... bravo ....congrats on your win!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Missy congratulations on your win in the contest ;) it is almost 24H00 over here, reckon I should head to bed now :D sorry for the mosquito *mwahugs*

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Nikko with your lovely inspirational write. Hope you are having a great Easter weekend. Love Alexa

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 7:59:00 AM

    Happy Easter, Nikko! Hope you have a Wonderful day! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/8/2012 5:13:00 AM

    You've echoed my sentiments,, Congratulations nikko on a very well deserved win with these beautiful lines which evoke a sense of deep spirituality.. A blessed Easter, love....

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 9:18:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Nikko! Love, Kim Have a blessed Easter.

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 12:28:00 PM

    Nikko congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 2:18:00 AM

    Congratulations nikko a beautiful piece xx

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 2:08:00 AM

    Back for a re-read!! Powerful lines! The contemplative voice suits this poem to a T! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 8:28:00 PM

    Kuddos on your awesome win, dear Nikko! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 5:34:00 PM

    congrats Nikko on sweet success sweet friend for this lovely entry ..so elegant..luv.. appreciate support always too..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 1:56:00 PM

    wow u are super woman Nikko luv.. an amazing entry for both Nette and me too.. how much better does that get luv? good luck in both.. having computer woest past two days so will try to judge tonight if Ron will help me after his tuim tum is full of his great pasta dinner and salad.. oh..

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:46:00 AM

    awesome and touching write, nikko - and very thought provoking. thanks for your kind thoughts, my friend. have a great easter

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 7:30:00 AM

    So very touching, the question you ask for the moment in time described. Reading this gives me a feeling of inner peace and a need for contemplation Nikko and it surely has to be aq fave for me. Soup mail. LOve, Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 6:46:00 AM

    soupmail.

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 1:52:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL! SO NICE TO SEE YOUR SPIRITUAL SIDE IN POETRY. Easily A sure Winner again~~ It has already won my Heart! Thanks for supporting my Blog. Though I know You always will .

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:50:00 AM

    I fall on my knees as i ask to be reborn..It gave me goose pimples sweetie.. touched my heart and soul.. I wonder what it would have been like being around Jesus.. but I know i'm so lucky that He is around you and me..hugs.. tmfvs and Hope ma is ok

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 9:25:00 PM

    aha, CLEVER girl, killing two birds with one stone that way. WAY to DO it. I hope you killed both birds with this magnificent poem, dearie. Very well done!!

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