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Revelation Act 4 - Scene 3-Final Prelude

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Revelation Act 4 - Scene 3-Final Prelude

____ I have flown as free as the waves of eternal thunder Sure as a flower pleading to the winter freeze I have gone before death should come Now as still as a frozen lake draping her winter coat a scintilla of eternity has shown me love In stillness, falling from mountain heights, a peaceful sonetto births fragmented light and..... I am gone I am gone I am gone ____

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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 5:00:00 PM
    This is a brilliant poem. Wow. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest. Very well written and enjoyed:)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Rick, love the win... ....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Rick, CONGRATULATIONS''' Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Rick, congrats on your 1st place win with this lovely verse! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 7:08:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 11:31:00 PM
    Wonderful poem by you Rick.Congrats on your 1st place win.

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 10:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem. I love it, expecially the line-"sure as a flower pleading to the winter freeze." very original thoughts.

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 9:13:00 AM
    Beautiful poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 8:08:00 AM
    wow!!!!!congrats on the top placement and the contest win........~sashi

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 3:12:00 AM
    Such a poem of peace...celebrating our eternal future together in Him. Congrats, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 10:23:00 PM
    I am gone with this write Rick, much enjoyed your write...p.d.

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 9:18:00 PM
    Indeed!!! Let that trumpet sound!! Wonderful write Rick,my friend-- big huggsss,love deb