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'Moonstruck'

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'Moonstruck'


Just like gunpowder
prolong exposure
not advisable
to walk on the moon
a dream for many

uncertainty
about the truth
not an issue
walk on the moon
ultimate 
aim in life
to explore

unearth
unknown
realms

I 
somehow
prefer

Not walking 
on the moon
It might spoil
my fantasy 
of a full moon
two hearts beating
echoing love

Romance disappears
when dust show its face
cuddling up with you
looking at the moon 
I remain starstruck

©01042012 

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  1. Date: 4/9/2012 7:20:00 PM
    Well this is a lovley write about the magical moonlight Wilma..) hope your Easter was good Joe..)

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 12:37:00 PM
    wishing u happy easter blessings Wilma luv.. hope u will join in the fun of my new contest too and "bite" another poet with your entry .. luv..

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 11:54:00 AM
    You said it, Wilma. I have no desire to explore unknown realms and spoil my fantasy (for me, the man in the moon). Excellent form and I love hat last line! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 11:35:00 AM
    I agree Wilma, much better to share romance looking at it than getting there. Great entry for the contest and glad for your win! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:25:00 PM
    congrads on your win!

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 9:48:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Wilma! A beautiful and creative write. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 8:06:00 AM
    Very very beautiful moon poem :)... La la luna la luna... you got me singing now :)

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Enjoyed reading your poem today. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 9:04:00 PM
    This is another different take on the theme, Missy! I really enjoyed your unique imagery here-- on gunpowder and I like the different mindset you put in here! Yeah, dust can be a romance killer, ei? I hope you're having a good week up ahead! I still owe you mail :(!! Mwahugs!! :D

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 6:14:00 PM
    Yes indeed they have shown us too much. Better to dream. Congratulations Wilma. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:40:00 PM
    congrats Wilma on winning an HM for this exciting entry in DH form.. an awesome wrie as always luv..

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:20:00 PM
    loved the ending! Congratulations, Wilma, on your win in my Hexaverse contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 1:07:00 AM
    Wilma ooh very good, if for the contest good luck, thanks for your comments and I do hope you will/have entered my contest..David

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 7:44:00 PM
    keep on writing about the Favorite subject of mine....so I can be Ready and Greedy along your Poet Tree creativity! Wilma NeeeeL-tY lol