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About This Poem

Haiku 102

closed my eyes as the


rhythm of the waterfalls


sang a lullaby


Part 2

I Dreamt Of



angels in heaven


singing a lullaby so...


softly and sweetly



Entry In Ms. P.D.'s April only posted poems contest
Carol Brown
3rd Place Winner

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    Judy Ball
    Date: 6/14/2012 2:33:00 PM
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    This has a serene quality. Very beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB
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    kash poet
    Date: 5/9/2012 2:20:00 AM
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    Beautiful haiku Carol.Congrats on your win.
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    Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 5/5/2012 8:57:00 PM
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    Streams, Brooks and Waterfalls always sing songs but it is only few like you, who can hear the rhythms of these sweet and enchanting lullaby. Enchanting beauty unfolds its charms in both parts Carol. Like always great creative paintings by you on the wall of PS. As always I was a joy to read such beautiful lines. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Carol Brown
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    Patrick Cornwall
    Date: 4/27/2012 6:32:00 AM
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    Interesting haiku... Patrick
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    mohammad reza zandipoor
    Date: 4/23/2012 9:00:00 AM
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    hi,your haiku is nice and full of mercifulness.enjoyed it.
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/20/2012 1:41:00 PM
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    This is a beautiful piece and it filled me with serenity and piece. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I hope you have a wonderful day! Always, Laura
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 4/20/2012 12:36:00 PM
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    This poem has a heavenly feel to it. Lovely piece. love phyl
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    Keith Bickerstaffe
    Date: 4/20/2012 10:59:00 AM
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    Super job, Carol! Perfect 575 structure and sweetly flowing rhythm. God bless, Keith
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/19/2012 5:26:00 PM
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    Oh this is great,,, love the way it flows ;} thank you for reading my words,, haven't posted for a while , need to get back into the grove ;} have a sweet day Carol !
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    Jancarl Campi
    Date: 4/19/2012 2:26:00 PM
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    What a beautiful and warm poem. Jancarl
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 4/19/2012 2:10:00 PM
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    yes dear friend time on PS has come to an end for me.. I will be deleting all my poetry and blogs .. a tedious task but will accomplish for as long as it takes.. my last post states the main reason why leaving and u have my email address so please keep in touch.. always will appreciate your luv and wonderful words Carol..
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/19/2012 10:06:00 AM
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    Can hear the song sweet LADY
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    daver austin
    Date: 4/19/2012 8:07:00 AM
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    Very relaxing write, Carol. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 4/16/2012 7:08:00 AM
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    Glad to see this won! congratulations :)
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 4/14/2012 11:26:00 AM
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    This is such a soothing read, Carol :) Congrats on your win and I missed greeting you on your birthday, sorry about that-- belated birthday hugs to you :D!!
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    Joseph May
    Date: 4/13/2012 6:52:00 PM
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    Congrats on a great win Carol...always...Joseph
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    Broken Butterfly
    Date: 4/13/2012 1:27:00 PM
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    Congratulations Carol on your win with this very pretty poem
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    bl devnath
    Date: 4/13/2012 10:04:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win for this fantastic haiku. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl
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    Marty Owens
    Date: 4/13/2012 9:45:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win...Very nice I enjoyed...and thanks for the nice comments...Marty
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 4/13/2012 9:44:00 AM
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    Had to read this one again -- it's so comforting, Carol. Love, Carolyn
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 4/13/2012 9:43:00 AM
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    Carol, I'm looking for some new poems. I'll be in Key West fishing from Sunday through Thursday. Hope you have a great time while I'm gone and post some new work for us to enjoy. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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    Erich Goller
    Date: 4/13/2012 9:04:00 AM
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    A beautyful Haiku duo.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/13/2012 6:02:00 AM
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    revisiting this one. I'ts so lovely. and CONGRATS on your win, Carol.
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    john aaron green
    Date: 4/12/2012 11:42:00 PM
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    saying hi, trying to get back up on the soup,,pease check out my new one..thanks carol...
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 4/12/2012 4:55:00 PM
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    Lovely thoughts! Congrad's on your win! Light & love
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    Bojosi Ditshwele
    Date: 4/12/2012 12:25:00 AM
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    Congrats Carol on your win. Keep the good work up
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 4/11/2012 8:26:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win Carol with this lovely haiku set. Blessings, Rhonda
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 4/11/2012 11:10:00 AM
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    Thank you everyone. Love, Carol
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    sashi prabhu
    Date: 4/11/2012 2:18:00 AM
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    conrats on the placement in the contest...lovely lines.....sashi
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/10/2012 11:58:00 PM
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    Carol, thank you for your wonderful entry... CONGRATULATIONS~ ;-) ALWAYS *PD
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