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In The Deep Sea

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In The Deep Sea

I'm in the secret world of my imagination A place of unique and amazing creation In a place where i can walk in slow motion In the deep sea, yes, that's my location In here I'm independent and free I can go anywhere my feet wanted to be I can travel without paying any extra fee I can even walk using only my knee Meet new friends, is what i wish Then suddenly, I'm playing hi5 with the starfish I go dancing with some jellyfish I was taught to swim by the milk fish In the deep sea, everything is possible You can meet friends that could lessen your struggle It's like I'm in underwater jungle You need to survive in any means that is possible

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  1. Date: 4/10/2012 6:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Melinde. Love, Carol

    Guadalupe Avatar Melinde Guadalupe
    Date: 4/10/2012 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot....(<")
  1. Date: 4/6/2012 6:34:00 PM
    very imaginative, Melinde. Congrats on your win.

    Guadalupe Avatar Melinde Guadalupe
    Date: 4/9/2012 4:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks.....(<")
  1. Date: 4/6/2012 5:09:00 AM
    Congratulations Melinda a worthy piece xx

    Guadalupe Avatar Melinde Guadalupe
    Date: 4/7/2012 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks.....(<")
  1. Date: 4/6/2012 1:39:00 AM
    congrats Melinde on a super win for a lovely entry luv.. happy easter blessings too..

    Guadalupe Avatar Melinde Guadalupe
    Date: 4/7/2012 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks...happy easter too...(<")
  1. Date: 4/5/2012 4:38:00 PM
    Quite an interesting work, liked it!!Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting for my contest. love, gautami

    Guadalupe Avatar Melinde Guadalupe
    Date: 4/7/2012 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you............. you've been an inspiration.....(<")