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The Ocean And The Wind

The roar of the ocean soothes my soul
With each wave my heart jumps for joy
Though very active
The water brings me peace and serenity
I love to sit back and soak in the conversation
Between the ocean and the wind
Theres a battle
But then they come to common ground
This is the time when I don't hear a sound
Its so calm relaxing and serene
Oh no I spoke to soon as the uproar began
First its with the ocean and now the wind

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  1. Date: 3/31/2012 10:27:00 PM

    I can see this clearly. I live in Ca. The picture you painted is real. brilliant work!

    Davis Avatar Tamara Davis Date: 4/1/2012 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I really appreciate your feedback. I am happy to know you liked the poem thanks again, Marlon God Bless You
  1. Date: 3/31/2012 4:29:00 PM

    Lovely visual poetry!!! So enjoyed. Michael.

    Davis Avatar Tamara Davis Date: 3/31/2012 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Michael, I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. God Bless You.